oml. i thoroughly enjoyed this.

So cute!

Excellent work on this story. I loved every moment of it :D

I truly love it. I even thought of it as a Sex TV Special.

Hehe, and this one I love as well...

ill never be able to look at strawberries again even though this was a good one shot

Sexy Tamaranian covered in chocolate. THERE IS A GOD!

This was a sweet (pun fully intended, I welcome the groans of annoyance) interlude between your two novel-length stories. Not too much I can think of here, still great characterization on both their parts. The only thing I'd point out would be the overuse of the words 'cheeky' and 'cheekiness,' and it might be just me. There isn't anything wrong with it, per se, but it seems a little repetitive to me. Again, it could just be my own proclivity, but I'd probably look to supplant some of them with words like 'mischievous,' 'impish,' or words along those lines. A minor nitpick on my part.

i love it so much

Awwww. I absolutely love you stories. You are quickly becoming one oft favorite writers. Everything is so intense and filled with emotion. It's a beautiful way to write. I think that if you tried you could become a real author. With original works and everything. So keep on writing! And please give this story another chapter. I love the one on one time with Starfire and Nightwing.

OMG! That was extermely sexy!Thumbs up! ;)

Awesome short story! Haha so that's what the distraction was :}. Keep up the great work! Can't wait to read more! Until next time, Laila :k

very cute

Sooo sweet! XD Kinky too!

Poor sheep. Hehe, they got lost. It's so starfire to burn a smiley face into the tree! Lol.

"He spoke of me falling from heaven..." - PRICELESS! I'm glad Dick didn't get too bent out of shape about the three going to Disneyland, since Star and him were having fun of their own. It woulda been hypocritical.

I loved this too!