Very touching! Its a sad poem though!

omg, sniff that was awesome this is the greatest poem I readed on this site

I love this. Seriously I do. And I agree with you: Yondaime and Naruto? Totally father and son.

Anyway, what I really wanted to say is that there's a major problem with this (awesome as it is). The problem is this: the Yondaime can't be following Naruto in spirit. His spirit resides in the God of Death's stomach. It's part of the seal he used: it sacrifices the user's soul (to be eaten by the God of Death), and in return, the God of Death gives the user the power to take one soul (or the closest thing) and seal inside someone else, to be eaten by the God of Death when the person who the soul is sealed inside dies.

So by about episode 100 of the series, there is no way that any of the former Hokages could be wandering around in spirit form.

It's still an awesome fanfiction, though

It's great, I loved it

That is a sweet poem.

And hey, I think he's Naruto's dad as well. :)

It was very good! I liked it alot!

Other than some spelling mistakes, alright. let's see...

line 4: had, not hade. Unless that's really a word...

line 30 (I think): your, not you.

Final line: Forgive, not forgiove.

I'm suscribing. Not too many people write about good old Yondie. And I believe that, even if they're not father/son, they're related. Plus, you're an awesome writer.