Im really liking where ur going with fic please keep up the good work

just letting u know I am still waiting for u to continue this story

A very good story. My only complaint is that we still don't know anything about the woman Severus had in his bed. Was she dead? And who was she? Was she his long-lost girlfriend/wife? What happened to her? Did Tom kill her? Will we ever find out?

I'm also looking forward to seeing Draco's reaction and interactions with "Nathan Silverfish," and vice versa.

Why do the Snapes have a home in America? And how is it they are rich? Was Severus' father magical in this story, or maybe a squib? And what about the Princes? Was Eileen not a Prince in this story? I hope you can update soon! :-)

You do realize that when a RESPONSIBLE adult finds a CHILD beaten to within an inch of their life there is NO requirement to abide by the child's skewed wishes concerning treatment. In fact RESPONSIBLE adults are REQUIRED by law and basic morality to seek out TIMELY proper treatment and secure TIMELY proper legal consequences for the perpetrators of the intentional and vial criminal behavior that caused said beating. The consequences for the put upon RESPONSIBLE adults are SECONDARY. In this admittedly fictional world St. Mongos is the required first response. Hogwarts' hospital wing is only a stopgap emergency response and the potion master's quarters is a COWARDLY IRRESPONSIBLE alternative for Snape and Dumbledore to evade their obligations to said child. With the time that has passed a return to #4 could reasonably be expected to inter a similar and more disastrous crime scene for Petunia and Dudley. You have described in great detail a psychotic pathological cereal killer in Vernon.

I realize that development is necessary, but I am beginning to feel like development is all this story is about. All interaction seem to be disastrous and long periods of unproductive contemplation follows.

Please continue this I would really love to see what's going to happen next

Anyone, that age, at 15-16, who would take that kind of abuse, deserves it, for not fighting back. Any child, in their right mind, would have killed Vernon in his sleep, or bashed his head in with a cricket bat. If nothing else, a good dose of lye, in his tea or coffee would have done the trick.

Hi! You might want to repost this chapter, because all I saw was this:

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Of course, I could pick out the sentences, but that would be really exhausting :P

Forever Me

...Wow... This is extremely good for being written when you were 12.

And I mean extremely good. Makes me glare at that number suspiciously and will it to turn into a 17 or something.

Hey...don't let a negative review get you down. I like your story and have been following it for a while. I was excited to see that you had a new chapter. So, haters are gonna hate and some of us never review but we like your story. Keep up the good work-and your punctuation seems fine to me! :-)

I'm not sure what's funniest about your story, the badly written over-the-top child abuse (which looks like it was written by some clueless, spoiled, rich suburban teenybopper who knows nothing of the real world) or the wrong punctuation.

Keep trying kiddo.

Plz update!

wow for the leaders of the light they are the most unobservant people

Its great! Plz continue

I quite liked this story, I'm sad it was apparently abandoned