good chapter. can't wait for the next one.

Wow...I haven't logged on for awhile, glad you updated though. Hehe, the romance is going further and Jill's like the reincarnation of something while Kai is starting to come out of the closet. Things sure are making progress now aren't they?

This fic has been really nice so far I'll be waiting for next chapter.

years and months may past speedily, for time is something constant regardless of our actions and as long as we are not idle, it shall be fairly fast, and that sword...did the idea come from the sword you find at the bottom of the 3rd(2nd?) mine in the first two ds games? and the teleport is awesome, like how useful the teleport stone thingy is. instant skip walking and takes up like zero energy to use. Ah well the people are stupid, if their souls and bodies are given, then what the point of the wish? it's not like they could enjoy it, unless it's for others but they can't cofirm it so it's still useless and glad to see you find a better way to help you write, au revoir

I fell in love with this story the moment I started reading. It's amazing! I'm just sad that Midna's gone. She was one of my favorite charactors! I cried when she was buried. Keep it up! Midna, rest in piece.

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Great chapter I'm so glad i found here on fanfiction. '' i was one of your readers a Lot time ago back on Tokyopop *.* I don't know if you remember me or not YD your doing a great job though I also want to be a writer and i know what you mean by the stares -.- Just ignore them dearie if you really love writing like i do then you shouldnt be afraid of what people think and what might happen. I'm just about to go into college (even though writers really don't need it *snicker) and writing is going to be my top priority job! I hope that we'll see each other in the stands even if i'm in the clearance rack ' hehe

Can't wait for more chapters!

YAY! update! does this jamie look like the female version of jamie or something more pretty, i would love seeing that. and im assuming your just friends and no longer best-friends with her? but going to a writing career is troublesome so you might want to get another job and write in your free time instead, just till you get popular. As for the magical creatures...what type of energy do they use? you could name them after that or call them elementals and they would be living forms of energy, starting with a single element and as they evolve they expand to more types. and if not you can name them after the world itself since they are created by it. just a few suggestions. Good Luck!

I had a great laugh at this chapter! Can't wait to see more of Jamie cross-dressing :P

You've got your fans here to support you. Do your best with your novel, I will personally be looking forward to it :D

Love this story, keep it up, I shall be looking forward for more _

wont the new story just increase your workload and make it more troublesome and stressing? you should watch out for your health too you know. though this chapter isn't as exciting it is rather interesting. It's possible then that other crystals are in other parts of the world though the most concentrated being around the island/town, now i wonder if they'll marry and travel the world or something, like in the game. dating with just talking and smiling is a rather interesting conclusion though

YAY! YOU UPDATED, since i read both of your stories, i really don't mind what u update since they're both awesome and look on the bright side, u still have loyal reviewers who will forgive you due to the awesomeness of your stories. and WHOA! two new characters at once? this is going to get complicated...specially since the only one who seems human is jill

short but good. can't wiat for the next one

so the athemyst eyed duo begins with darkness glooming and just the tiniest tint of hope, eh? and i thought this was a humor and love story, ah well with comedy comes tragedy right? when you hit bottom one can only go up i suppose it took long but worth the wait for this chapter, and is it possible to like revive her? ...they pretty much reincarnate in the newer harvest moons

I read all of the chapters, and it is by far one of the best fics I've ever read! I love how you put your own twist on it! I actually cried when Midna died! D;

Also, I'm glad you made it happier when Jamie and Jill teamed up! Great chapter, and I hope you update soon!(:

good chapter, very good with description. can't wait till the next one. hope you have a great summer!