I really love this story... and it seemed like a particularly appropriate time to re-read and review for Mori's birthday. Thanks for writing it, this has been a favorite for a while. :)

love it

so cute...

cute :D

I really liked it :)but it was like you said, the ending isn't all that for me, kinda ruined it with mori's long speech and too much fluff (for me :p)

but I thought the rest of the story was great, it's really cute

hope you write another one like this

so made for me archive

i love it

Hey. First of all I'd like to say that the story plot line is really sweet and I liked it a lot. But, the grammar, spelling, syntax, and the lack of a stable view point drew my attention away from your story. It would make your writing a lot better if you decided to either get a beta reader or write up your story and review it a few days later with a fresh view. Trust me when I say that having grammar and spelling mistakes are the biggest things that draw away readers and reviewers. Good luck with your future endeavors!

so cute!

OKay great story, But 2 critisims, I think when you say "to held her" Its actualy supposed to be "to Hold her", just a minor grammer thing. and second, I would definately make this story longer, it doesn't seem quite finished and there are very few MoriXHaruhi fics I consider to be even passible or worth the trouble of continuing and this happens to be a favorite ouran pairing of mine besides KyoyaXHaruhi, so It would be nice to have a little more on this story. No offence meant. THatnk for your time.

...Rin...

you know. i've read this for the umpteenth time.

OBVIOUSLY, now i chose the wrong time to read it again!

ah!now my head is all full of much and i'm gonna go to sleep dreaming of haruhi and mori living their happily ever after and AH!I HAVE A TEST TMR!

yeah well. panicky freaking out time is officially over-_-

*sniffle sniffle*

Sweet sweet memories... M...

You're a genius. By the way, vanilla smells heavenly.

AW THAT WAS SUCH A BEAUTIFUL ENDING!

honey played matchmaker and finally got them together!yay!

AW! This is completely and utterly cute! I love it so much. I'm sad it's over though. Will you do a sequel about how the Host Club reacts to their relationship? Pwease? You don't have to, it was juts a thought. Let me know! Xx Tohru x Seraphina xX

OMG! That was so cute and sweet! The last chapter was beautiful! I could not supress my inner fan girl. I literally sqealed with joy and almost cried at their confessions at the end. I loved it!