That's a very good story. the way you described her feelings and the plot actually made me feel as if i was there. please write more.

yea, you should go ahead and continue the story

brillaint, please continue t, you capture it perfectly. brilliant. sos

I love it.. Write more? Please?

good. who was the narrator and the overseeer?

Pretty good. But I think it needs a little more of something.

That's deep, disturbing, and wonderfully written. But DK's right, unless the Animorphs play a very important role later on in the story, make it an original.

wow deep

Disturbing. I liked it!

Very eloquently written.

very good...very

Hey, this is really good, but I think it would be better if you didn't try to associate it with animorphs. The animorph reference seems kind of out of place. Sever it from animorphs and this is a fantastic original story.

Nifty for something original. Very nifty. Could you kind of make it into a bigger story? Like tell how she got there. Give her a background and this overseer a background? That would be even more interesting. I would love to read it if you did!