PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE U HAVE TO FINISH THIS STORY QUICK IT'S GOOD FOR RATINGS SO FAR

Really Cool!

omg this is sooo good write more

A TUNNEL? srry caps on

OHH I LOVE TOKYO MEW MEW (MEW MEW POWER)

Where is chapter 8

oh! you got to update soon, it been about a year since you last updated. so please can you conitune this?

So far this continues to be cute. I like the part at the park.

Its very cute so far

You know kidnapping a super hero that isn't even a Japanese citizen is probably a violation of alot of national laws in both the USA and Japan. In short if the guy's in charge of the cafe don't think of something fast they are in for alot of trouble no matter how noble the end result would be.

You know it would be interesting if when the mews start thier introduction and when it's raven's turn nothing happens and everyone start's looking around for a few seconds then Raven instead of introducing herself she launches her attacks with her old powers ignoring her new Mew powers (hey she has more experiance using those powers even though right now they are probably a little uncontrolable (not to mention alot more unstable now) because of those morons in charge of the cafe.

Also Robin would probalby have figured out that Raven didn't leave the Cafe very quickly and have it stacked out. (Considering their is evidence that Raven went into the bathroom but none of her leaving the Cafe when the titan's started their search)

Boy the Mews have just labled themselves Supervillians by accident.

Also I'm supprised she didn't tell the titans it's not the strangest thing that happaned to them and she is probaly very very resentful that she didn't get a choice before they altered her DNA with out aproval (it's a very bad voilation that according the the Titan's experiance only Supervillians would do such a thing). You know Raven would probalby isolate herself a lot from the other mews probably to the point of rarely conversing with them other than to acnolage their presance (also cat's are noticably territorial since their are two cat's here tempers will flare somewhat and you will get uncontrolable outburst's of raven's powers) considering she isn't exactly a member she's only in this because she needs a cure for this DNA problem and she probably doesn't trust anyone in that Cafe much right now becuase of their assosication with the bosses and the fact that they are so at ease with the fact of altering another person's DNA without that person's concent. (in america it normally points toward that someone also has an ulterior motive)

(Personally I would be furious at someone doing that to me)

Culture clash with ideals

You know to be honest their is a few problems I seem to have with this story.

First Raven is very out of character espicially the fall part. Raven can simply levetate and she would not panic at all because of that. Her magic powers are not simply she could just forget about and she has apparently just not considered using them or even thinking about them any more. She apparently never even attempted to free herself form the flimsy ropes that she was tied to with her powers she could have actually easily have done it and then restrained the people in the room with her. Raven is also capable of phasing through solid matter which would call into question as to why she was worried that much because of a locked door. SHe could have also simply yanked it off with her powers.

Also your having Raven more emotional than she normally is. I'm guessing that's becuase of the genetic changes. However that will lead to a problem. Since her powers are fueled by her emotions and having all these uncontroled emotions would cause her powers to flare up unconrolably at any time. Something will likely explode some where, nightmarish apparations could spawn at bad time's as well (like when Raven was afraid). The cat instincts would simply cuase alot more problem with control now. Also Raven really didn't need to be genetically mutated, Infact I'm supprised that she was not infuriated when he told her. Even though it gave her greater strength, speed and adgility...well she really didn't need any of that.

You know Raven accepted that to easily when she should have stormed out of there told the titans about it which would probably have caused them to demand that he undo that damage. In america genetic modifying people with out their concent even if it's to save the world is looked in a very very bad light especially by super hero's.

It's also unlikely that anyone at the Cafe knew about her being a titan at all or they would have been more nervose at doing this. After all if the Titans knew what they did they would have probably creamed them.

Also if you do a fancy Transformation like that infront of an american superhero or villian and pose like that more likely they would burst out in laughter.

Followed by a, "Why did you do that you could have caught me by supprise. Instead you introduce yourselves and elimimate any advantage you could have had. You guy's are really amitures."

Raven would probalby not be very effective now with dealing with supervillians now.

You know those guy's may just find out it may have been a mistake to have mutated Raven with out first researching who she was. Especially when mysterious things start happaning around her (like manholes, cars, and food exploding. Shadowy creatures lurking around the cafe at night. This would reveal that Raven's powers are starting to go out of conrtrol.

Also you can't simply remove raven's powers just by modifying her DNA. those powers are magical in nature and therefore can't be removed like that.

Awsome! No, Bad Kish! Stay away from Raven! She is Beast Boy's! And LOLZ! You go Mimi! Way to make him pay! And YAY! Someone is going to save Ravey! I think I know who it is and I;m really hoping I'm right cause, that person is so cool! UPDATE ASAP!

hey angelkittychan,

love your story(you all ready know that)

please update as soon as you can.

byebye

blacknessRaven

p.s email me as soon as possible PLEASE!

Hurry and update!I can't wait to see who.

KISHIEY-KUN!1!1!1!1!