| Reviews for For The Last Time |
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   Shadowsmisery chapter 1 . 5/3/2019 As much as I wanted to keep reading and see where the story went I can’t stand the amount of author notes mid story. It’s one thing if it’s between pieces completely separate or at the beginning or end of the chapter entirely. Mid interruption makes it impossible to not be irritated and confused. |
| gome chapter 16 . 6/12/2015 Sorry boys but please do a sequel and inuyasha shut up dog boy |
| RunaRina chapter 16 . 10/19/2013 wow..i really like the thing about naraku! what an easy death after entertainment i mean... i like the way how you write it's just very entertaining and it losens the tense building up in me well quite a bit because of those after monologues of yours good job! |
| tori chapter 1 . 6/15/2012 Dude shut the hell up yu dumbass |
| lilpopsplash chapter 16 . 12/25/2010 o my god this story is amzing and i no that u made this some time ago i just wanted 2 let u no. i really would love it if u counited this story. |
| DangerOokami chapter 16 . 10/25/2010 Love your story! Please do a sequel! It would be most apretiated! Btw Sesshomaru, why did it 'kill' your character as you said I thought it was cue and sweet story... Fluffy fly fluffy (shakes head and sighs) you just don't understand this kin of stuff.. Anway FL I absoultuly love your story! DangerOokami out 3 peace! |
| Sesshomaru's Filly chapter 16 . 11/2/2009 D im over a year late for reviewing this fic x.x did you do a sequel? i loved this ficcy 3 |
| CrescentMoon760 chapter 13 . 9/27/2009 LOL haha yah ur funny but ur tryin to get rid of us quickly to get bugged more don't u? well have fun writing the other story! CrescentMoon760 |
| CrescentMoon760 chapter 11 . 9/26/2009 LOL! i have never read any storys of all my 200 storys of sessxkag that had sesshoumaru, kagome and other people do that to jaken i'm so glad u did it cause he is so anoying and i bet he loves sesshoumaru because he said, 'Filthy wench! Remove your grubby hands from the esteemed and handsome Lord Sesshomaru's person this instant! He is only to be touched in such a manner by me, his most loyal and devoted servant!' so yeah and to tell u the part where i said right now about jaken liking sesshoumaru, i copyied and pasted i cause its 11:00 and im tired so yeah so long angd goodnight but i'm gonna keep reading now so till next chapter! CrescentMoon760 |
| CrescentMoon760 chapter 6 . 9/26/2009 LOL! poor sesshoumaru u kno those things hurt like hell and back again! |
| CrescentMoon760 chapter 4 . 9/26/2009 LOL! |
| hinaxnaru chapter 16 . 6/22/2009 loved it though i wish u would have written about the kids |
| Lune chapter 3 . 2/7/2009 I think I read this story, before, but just in case. I'll keep reading. I like the whole idea of her strength making her a youkai and I love the pairing, but... You need to work on your characterization, Kag and Sess are really OC-especially with the way you made their beasts. You seem to rush things too. I would have enjoyed these chapters a lot more if you had drawn them out and revealed her wish, the consequences of that wish, and so on in a timely manner instead of spilling them all at one. Showing them instead of stating them would also make your story a lot more effective. Some more description and plot and character development would be great. The itnerjections in the middle of your work is a bit destracting, though often funny. |
| Weapon-Master chapter 16 . 1/5/2009 Squel please i love the story - |
| Shayleatone chapter 4 . 11/18/2008 enjoying so far |
