It was beautiful... I loved it!

this story is was really cute. I enjoyed it.

a really beautiful story

i like... will you ever write more i wonder?

Nice story. You did good with detail, maybe too much detail. LOL. JK. But, all the chapters were really short. Make longer chapters next time, but it was good for your first Fanfic, I should'nt even being saying this since I suck at fanfiction. But I've read enough of this kind of fanfiction to know what it needs. It deffinately was good for your first fanfiction.

nice, but the chapters were really short. Lengthen the chapters, but overall, it was good.

Alright, I have a few suggestions. I hope you don't take it bad. I don't mean to sound mean! D:

But anyway. I think the story was too short for all of the content. I understand how they would fall in love in that short amount of time and all (since my online BF and I met in real life and went through the same process as the characters did... except for the shower and stuff), but like... you should put more detail into each chapter.

The story seemed a little rushed, is all. :D So try to include more detail for each scene! Something I would include in this story is the other character's reactions to Haseo going to Alkaid's house and all. I bet they would be funny. :D And it would add more onto the story, too.

Hm... start a new paragraph each time a new person speaks so it's easier to tell who is saying what. Work on your grammar a little, but your spelling is great! _

Otherwise, I can't think of anything else. But I would like to say again to please not take this as a flame, it's not. I promise. It's just suggestions. I was flamed harshly on my first story and now I'm a little shaken when it comes to trying to writing fan fiction, so I know it sucks to be flamed, but it's helpful to have good suggestions and, hopefully, learn from them.

You don't have to take my suggestions, either. It's up to you. Just remember to be free with your stories! Your first story was a lot better than most are! Good job, I enjoyed it! :D

Alkaid and Haseo forever. Totally. xD They're so adorable together. Let me say, also, I adored your description of real-life Alkaid! Her appearance, especially. :D See ya around!

I totally honor you. I wouldn't have reviewed if you didn't include Romance of the Three Kingdoms and the fact that Alkaid is also the name of a star or something (which I just found out today with Google Image search!).

So I love you for doing homework. I love you. -hugs awkwardly-

But the last line of this chapter was kinda cheesy. "Prince"? P Hehe, I'm going on to read the next few chapters!

This story is awesome! I can't wait for more of your stories!

wow... I spent some time wishing there was a good HaseoAlkaid fic, but this one is not good. It's great! Sorry, that sounded cheesy. I haven't slept in about 48 hours. Anyway, I somehow overlooked this and when I found it, it was as if all my prayers had been answered! Thank you for a wonderful fanfic! P.S. Loved the epilogue!

I'm not too big on HaseoxAlkaid, but I don't think that its horrible either. I liked this story a lot though, it did seem a bit short. You stuck with the character's personalitys very well. And there's nothing better than an arguement in a story, I could see Haseo saying that to Alkaid too.

Not bad! :) I'm more of a ShinoxHaseo fan, but you pulled me into the story and made the pairing believable. Normally, it's pretty difficult to convey the characters outside of their normal personas in The World, but I think you did a great job! Keep writing! You're well on your way already!

well, it's sweet, but too short, i'm afraid. perhaps a sequel is in order?

*favorited!*

wow. very nice story. keep going, I want to see what happens next. _

I truly did enjoy this story but I have one simple question for you. Why exactly did you have to seperate this into five chapters instead of simply putting it into a single oneshot story? I mean, it does flow as a chapter story, but I guess that it was continuous enough to be written as a single oneshot. Aside from this complaint, I truly enjoyed this.