| Reviews for The child incident and Kakashi's discovery |
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AMemelordAndWeeb chapter 3 . 4/16 i'm addicted |
AMemelordAndWeeb chapter 1 . 4/16 reading this after watching your lie in april cured my depression |
PrettyInPink1515 chapter 4 . 2/21/2019 I'm hoping Gaara will win this poll! I know it's a bit late...hehe. You shouldn't of added Sasuke to the poll XD (I just read your AN). |
PrettyInPink1515 chapter 3 . 2/21/2019 Ok, I'm not a fan on how emotional your characters are and how they all want to talk about things. To me they sound more like teenage girls and not the characters we love so much. Other than that, I love your story so far. It's an interesting concept and different! Which I like. |
pinkymmg chapter 10 . 4/8/2018 Aww this is such a cute stor! |
slyside chapter 1 . 2/9/2018 bookmark |
CallMeHiromi chapter 1 . 12/21/2017 Wait. THIS WAS JUST CHAPTER ONE?! I THOUGHT I PASSED THROUGH LIKE, NINE CHAPTERS IM GOING INSANE |
Li chapter 1 . 10/12/2017 ...? But fruit IS a food?! |
princessayame12 chapter 7 . 9/10/2017 I thought Sasuke was the bottom |
AkaneShiro chapter 9 . 7/20/2017 I thought Gaara can't sleep? |
KagomeMiyamoto chapter 10 . 2/18/2017 I'm not trying to discourage you, but the story wasn't for me |
KagomeMiyamoto chapter 10 . 2/18/2017 okay, so I love the plot, however there are a few things you need to fix. Naruto isn't weak at all. He is actually pretty strong. so maybe add his jutsus that he learned from Ero-san. You kind of made everyone really weak. haha but hopefully you see this and know that I don't hate the story but it kind of went side ways after the first two chapters |
Jj chapter 10 . 11/30/2016 Aww no Garra naru lemon "pouty face" |
kittycat56321 chapter 3 . 9/4/2016 m |
Tomb Raider and Walking Dead chapter 1 . 9/26/2015 I llllllllllllloooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvvvveeee this! |