You idiot. If Ed wanted Roy so bad, but didn't want to give in, he'd GET HIS ASS UP, and then GET THE FUCK OUT. Maybe hold a little grudge against him. Or he could give in and it would be his turn to be a rapist, back to his rapist. Roy would've liked that.

This is sweet, but after Ed forgives Roy... I'd always wondered about Roy's reaction. Jumping on Ed, perhaps? Maybe a thank you, at least?

Nice story

That was cheesy angst... but I liked it! And I just remembered that in grade 6, my class used the word 'tree' or branch or flower (etc, etc.) i place of the f-word, and we would be like 'branch you!' or 'go tree yourself' and the teacher would just stare... i'll shut up now.

~ Mae

ED-SAMA DONT FALL FOR THE PERVERTED RAPIST!sry had to say that anyway it was really angsty and amazing at the same time...back to wat i was saying ED-SAMA GO FOR HIM PLZ U 2 MAKE A REALLY GOOD COUPLE just not the rapist piece of roy...

Roy: HEY I HEARD THAT!

Ed-sama: WHY THE HELL R U CALLING ME Ed-SAMA?

aw poor ed

...(sniff)...so sweet! I loved it! Besides the whole Roy raping Ed, it was absolutely cute and sweet! You did good on the lemon though!

lol i like

Very good! I like it!... _

I love it! Funny how irony is I hate rape but I love the drama of it, well, so long it's only with fictional characters.

LOVE IT! A story to read before I sleep! SWEET DREAMS!