The flow of words in this felt efforless. The translation created an interesting use of words that I liked. Thanks for sharing this!

Now, that was some great writing there. Loved your version of the events from S3. I hope you write more.

Hey, que suerte tener una hermana que se lea tus fics y te los corrija! No sé que pasa conmigo pero me gustan más los fics cuando los leo en inglés que en español (incluso los míos)... extraña deformación ;-). No suelo leer fics que no sean de Danny, pero me entró la curiosity de leer este porque era tuyo y en inglés. Muy bien hecho, me ha gustado mucho. :-)

Lately I've been too lazy to review stories, but I had to with this story. It is an absolutely amazing character study. Gave me shivers at the end with "four other people he’ll say that he was asleep, and it was true, he was until that very moment." You are fantastic writer. Keep up the great work.

That was an AWESOME story. I Love that part of

Malone vs. Malone. I hope that you can come up

with one for John Michaels. Those are my 2 favorite

shows of Season 3. Keep up the FANTASTIC Writing.

Keep up the well picked portions of shows to place

to music.