l like see new chapter think you

that was so romantic

that was a nice story

i hope you will update...

since its 2008 now

aw that was so cute!

Hiya,
I'm Topaz from Australia, Perth. I would just like to say that I like your story so far, but you don't need to have such large print all the time, the size you used in your first chapter was good but it seems to be getting bigger each chapter It's almost like the saying "People speak louder to seem more intelligent" you've already proven that your intelligent so you shouldn't need to have such large print, also if you're worried about the people with eyesight problems there's a button in the top right corner that allows them to enlargen their print size. Other than that you're doing well.
Keep writin'
Topaz

you HAVE to write more storys then that or else i mite get ants in mi pants 'cause of waiting ya know...hey im nah trying ta be mean its just that im sick of waiting everyday!

I DEFINITELY know how you feel of the sore muschle thingy 'cause now my leg muschles are killing me 'cause of the game leap-frog(blushing)...I suck at these ecxorsize games in gym time!...

you a good story writer here arent cha?(heehee I love saying that!)

you a good story writer here arent cha?(heehee I love saying that!)

...And they lived happily ever after..

*sigh*

YAY!

Loved the storyo

VERY cool idea_

love the story! keep on writing.

WoooooW...

how cute u right so good! btw when can i except enother tenchi/ayeka story from u? i' waiting!

ahhhh, how sweet. I like it. Wonderfully written...although I would have LOVED to hear Raye's reaction after she found out about Endymion and Serenity.

Reeeeeeeely cool