This great I can’t stop reading it ️

The movie was YuGiOh The Movie

No offence but I kinda imagined Morgan Houston with a deck of Amazons and Beast monsters.
Also if Mark McNamara was a duelist his should be Atlantean monsters or Dinosaurs.
And Daniel MicKanky his deck should be Dragon monsters along with ABC Dragon Buster along the fusion materials and his ace should be Horus the Black Flame Dragon.

It was a amazing capter

Dear lord, what unnecessary drama.
Why is Alexis yelling? Why is Jaden such a wimp?

Never understood those artifical dramatic love storylines.
Hope that doesn't happen to often in the following chapters, because otherwise I like this story...

Fantastic story going to read the next one

Hu-Si-Oh movie is the original Yugioh movie with the Pyramid of light and Anubis. I actually typed in Hu Si Oh movie into google thinking it was a Japanese movie

Dude that last part could have turned into a sex scene. By the kiss on the neck and all, but still it was a great ending for the chapter

Wait! I still want to know everyone's reaction to Alexis and Jaden riding up to the station on a supposedly wild horse! You can't just gloss that out!

I loved getting to meet Jaden's family in this series as well as his past as The Captain. This story was well written with little to no grammar/spelling errors which is hard to accomplish. This plot was extremely unique, creative, and lovable just like your OC's.

I love this story a lot, it was the first I read in this fandom to really make me like Jaden and Alexis pairing.

Keep doin' you 'cause no one can do it better!

-Be Happy, Be Healthy.
PS. Please start autumn time love, I really want to know whose to blame for that car accident in springtime love, no rush though. :)

Now I want ice cream:[

I loved the story so far, I can't take my eyes off the words.

Jaden cares WAY too much about his friends to just let one be hurt and go get some ice cream happyly. Chazz is his friend. He'd be hopping mad and worried about him if he was that baddly hurt. And he dosent like fighting eather. He'd never let it go on. NONE of them would! These guys are way too OOC for my likeing so I think I'll pass on the rest of this. Being slightly OOC is one thing, but this is just rediculus.

Ok. First off thats way too manny planed traditions. A get together is WAY more fun when its random activities. Secend, not everyone will like the same things. Everyones different and has diferent intrests. For exsample, I dont think Alixis is the type to love football and watter fights. She strikes me as a less agressive type. You need to work on makeing your charicters show those diferences. Its way too boring otherwise.

This story was amazing, I wished that I could've come up with the idea. Jaden's family is almost as big as mine (Dad's side 16, including my brother and I) and baby Emma is just adorable, please keep writing and please do another story for the Gang Stories, they are simply awesome.