Not bad until it was ruined by the crack NatNao scene.

Good Short, but didn't Mayo and Shion show up in the Otome series as the prequel? (My-Otome 0 I do beleive)

Interesting. I like it. :P

Nice.

LOL at the two kissing scenes, though I do wonder why Shizuru didn't try to "teach" them all. :P

And ack, a typo! You spelt Arika as Akira when Mai was saying Mayo was better than Arika.

oMG! LMAO! that was too rich! You know I never thought of it that way. The reason for a new lead character int he Hime Universe. You should put that Mayo is more stacked than Mai too. LMAO this is too good!

LOL. You should write a swquel. Nice!

Hello again!

I'm glad that you wrote a second part to this! Recently a friend emailed me some pictures with "MH: Destiny" on it and a strange new girl! I was puzzled. Then, this update reminds me of the previous information in the first chapter! Hallelujah, we have our answer!

This was a good second part. I do have odd thoughts though.

Why wouldn't Mai not enjoy a break from the Hime excitement. Think about it. No major tragedy, no sick brother to worry about, no having to fake enjoying the attention of two males and ignoring the loving adoration of Mikoto. (your ending tells that tale! LOL)

I do have to say that I enjoy "the test!" I'm sure that Shizuru was just joking about learning. After one episode of Otome, we know she's a player!

Thanks for more fun!

writer-jm

Heh, lol. Nicely done, though you used "Akira" instead of "Arika".

mai is so not straight. but we can't have 2 main characters... can we? ;p

thanks for the update XD

*snort* As if Natsuki would betray Shizuru with Nao, of all people. (note the ShizNat fangirling) The mayo fetish, though, is um, well, slightly believable. Heh.

I love your twisted imagination. The products of it are always so entertaining!

Eh, what is it with everyone else having fic ideas so much like mine these days? I wonder if I'm getting more in tune with your thoughts...*squints* Nah, can't be.

Nice to see that my crappy notes could give Shane-san something to write about, anyhow.

The first rumor was more funny to me than the second, maybe it's because ikka's always preferred Nao to be with Shizuru if she ever hooked up with somebody...*dry laugh* Yeah, personal bias works personally. And the fact that both stories were equally ridiculous kinda makes one wonder how exactly those supernaturals' minds work at Fuuka, doesn't it? *laugh*

This review is getting incoherent, I should stop now...

Cheers,

ikka

Funny. Much better than the original Destiny :D Go on.

lol that was must be really pissed of with the idea of natnao