Reviews for Miscalculation
nejisaku858 chapter 4 . 8/31
:-0 :-0 :-0 :-0 :-0 oh...My...GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!
nejisaku858 chapter 3 . 8/31
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH! BULMA AND VEGETA KIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEED! D XD XD XD XD XD
nejisaku858 chapter 2 . 8/31
Vegeta got some naughty thought goin' on up in there! XD XD XD XD XD
nejisaku858 chapter 1 . 8/31
Vegeta. You naughty man!
Shrey chapter 9 . 4/1/2019
I am a yamcha hater but still your work ...it's just Great...I loved it by my heart you did the best job at this keep it up...god bless you and your loved ones
OutlastingFear chapter 4 . 12/26/2018
I was loving this story so much but this line, “He didn't appear to be as big as Yamcha” completely killed my interest. :/

I’m a big VegeBul fan and the last thing I want to read is Vegeta having a small dick, especially compared to dumbass Yamcha. I mean, why is it so difficult to just let Vegeta have the biggest dick Bulma has ever seen?
Also, he’s a saiyan, he should automatically have a bigger dick than Yamcha. Man, that was such a bummer to read. I feel let down. :( Vegeta should have had a big long fat dick, and Yamcha a small puny dick. I want to cry. I was so into this story too. Argh, but I feel upset. Geez. We’re VegeBul fans, we want Vegeta to be superior. You know what I mean? :’(
MadLover2133 chapter 9 . 5/23/2018
Awesome fanfic probably one of my favorites! It's kinda sad that I find Yamcha pathetic even when he is ok with Bulma and Vegeta cuz I find him pathetic when he tries to fight Vegeta for her too. I guess I find him pathetic all around cuz he never deserved Bulma. I always knew she deserved better than someone weak like Yamcha. Thanks for the awesome story
pandanare chapter 9 . 1/10/2018
What a great story! I totally love your idea of the how Trunks was conceived. I won't lie, I eat up those "infamous three years" stories and love the sultry, albeit, tumultuous relationship others describe. Yours however, seems more realistic (even if it's only a show) and really doesn't portray them as reluctant lovers. I like how you kept Bulma's character intact and didn't have her falling apart because her "man" wasn't around. He wasn't even her "man" and she wasn't deluded into thinking so. I know her character tends to be passionate and could totally get caught up in that, but she's way too confident and headstrong. She got pregnant and took charge of the situation. I love seeing them together, but your interpretation was great. They really didn't develop feelings (not strong ones anyway) for one another until afterwards and ultimately Trunks was just an accident. In my mind, this is totally how it happened and I think it can be corroborated that it was just a one-night-stand that led to Trunks anyway. I of course always do appreciate a good lemon. Keep up the good work if you decide to write more!
Guest chapter 9 . 5/20/2017
Loved it!
ACorf chapter 9 . 5/8/2017
This was very well done. I enjoyed the characters and the story. You made them seem like real people.
zfj chapter 9 . 3/27/2017
Loved it. I'm glad you kept Yamcha a good guy.
Sea Wan River chapter 3 . 3/2/2017
you might want ask yourself 'Do I really need to explain this?' sometimes. The "Obviously, she was misinterpreting his indignant expression, etc" didn't need to be there. we get it. Also love the P&P misinterpreting things vibe
Sea Wan River chapter 1 . 3/2/2017
fun chapter
Sea Wan River chapter 1 . 3/2/2017
great first chapter
Ignis Draconem chapter 9 . 3/20/2016
honestly, vegeta and bulma are my favorite couple in dbz, gohan and videl a close second, and i always tried making scenarios for how trunks was born and all, this fits perfectly
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