loved it! On to part two:)

I agree it would have been too son...but I loved the little teaser:)

I love this story! This is my second time reading it! It so brings back memories:)

poor brian. i feel for him.

HOWEVER, i hate when people have ricky's attitude about jordan using the letter as being insincere. that's not it. for instance, teenagers (or really people of any age) use song lyrics or poetry to express their feelings. just because the words are not your own, it doesn't mean that you don't fully agree with the underlying sentiment. i get if someone wants to make a deal out of the potential deceit of jordan not initially disclosing that he didn't write it...but don't make it about him not meaning the words.

ok, rant over.

still liking this story...but a little worried about this spectator in the parking lot (rayanne?)

Hey there - i know this stoy's been complete for ages. I've just been trolling for MSCL fics having recently purchased the dvd set in a fit of nostalgia. now all of a sudden, i'm back in 1995 and fixated on angela chase and jordan catalano. so i've turned to fics to get it out of my system. not sure if you even read reviews anymore.

with the shortness of the chapters, it took me a few chapters to get into the grove of your story. but i just wanted to pop in and say that i thought you did a really good job with the loft scene. it was a good mixture of angst, sweetness, humor and truth...without feeling schizophrenic.

Evil cliffhangr indeed... But forbidden fruits have the sweetest taste...

Great chappie!

Good argument between Rayanne and Angela! Drunk or not, love how she's the little voice in Angela's head, having her doubt Jordan once more.

Evil indeed! I hadn't thought Angela was gonna do it this soon, no, but having rayanne and Jordan's umm-ing pop back in her head at that exact time... Wicked!

'First she turned him into a student, then a 'friend,' then a jealous guy, then a babbling idiot, all things he'd never experienced before Angela Chase.'

Loved this, never gave it much thought that Jordan was actually aware of the changes he went through, and never realised he didn't like who he was becoming. Probably 'cause he lost control over situations he ALWAYS had control over.

LOVE this!

Love how you write down their thoughts.

Angela's smile when she agrees to go to the loft, isn't just a yes-jordan-i'll-follow-you-to-the-end-of-the-world-without-asking-questions, not she smiles because she thinks she knows Jordan's motives and it cracks her up. Sooo good.

And later, when she realises the irony when Jordan can't find words when she intterupted their kissing but she's happy about that.

Brilliant so far. Sexy kiss scene, btw ;)

heyz i just wanted to say that i loved ur story but y didnt u continue writing it u were just abt to start with da gd parts plllzzz tell me if u r going to finish writing the part two of that last chapter of the story

I'm reading this whole thing for the second time round hehe, so good :)

Ah i just realized that this is a completed story and that you've written MORE! I generally don't check profiles until i finish a story...but i kind of HAD too because I'm addicted like i said.

Well that just made my year, I got the series for christmas and NOW somewhere for all the loose ends to wrap up. Thank god.

I like it when he notices she's upset (ie. when Sharon's dad was in the hospital, and they weren't even together! and he hugged her and then when Rickie was homeless and he took her to him. He is like the most thoughtful ex ever). Thanks for keeping them together instead of distancing themselves when his friend came over, also yay one of his friends approves! :) I always thought it was weird we never got to really hear anything they said or thought on the situation (except that she's weird...which isn't helpful.)

oh Jordan...Go to class :(

I have to say i love Angela's friendship with Sharon, I can see how they were best friends (she's so funny with Kyle)...she just seemed to understand and listen when Angela needed someone. Make them Best friends again please...okay so its too late since you last updated in July LAST YEAR...but yeah you got me sort of addicted, so if you wouldn't mind...