I love this story, you should go over the story again some words do not fit in some sentences and its semester not trimester. All in all I loved it.

Great story.

Loved the story, couldnt stop reading it x

I remember reading this story last year some time. It was one of the first and best Warren OC stories I have read. Took a while to find it though.

I love this story, I'm so adding this to my favorite list. I can't wait to read more of your stories. So update soon, make more, and keep up the great work.

That was great!

i thought it was an amazing plot twist even if i saw it comming. the only issue i have with your story at the moment is that you dont know when to use then instead of than, and a few other minor word switchings. if you want i could go through your story and clean those up. i've been looking for a project. eather way its not really that big of a deal. just let me know

That was so cute! Loved it!

AWE! That was so cute! Long, but cute.

Raine

I loved it!

It was so sweet and full of awesomeness!

And I KNEW Billy would get pregnet again!

I love the story so far!

It's so sweet!

I have to finish it later...but I can't wait!

EPIC!

I don't understand why their pictures told Mike off. And why did they get detention for just showing a bunch of pictures of themselves?

I am going to read the rest of this story because I think it is really good already, but you need a few English lessons.

Your possessive

You're You are

Then~has to do with time order

Than~has to do with comparitive

I would put more, but I'm running late to my class.

That was great. I know i din't comment on any other page, but i figured i'd just make it an end of story review. It really was great. I'm off to read more of your stuff :)