HOW CAN SHE STILL NOT KNOW PHANTOM IS FENTON! IT'S EVEN MORE OBVIOUS NOW THEN EVER! WTF VALERIE?!

I'm glad that you gave a story to Valerie after d-stabilized. I always felt that more need to be explored between Danny, Vlad and Valerie. I especially like Valerie's epiphany of her need for vengeance.

The idea is good. I always wanted to know more of dani.

Excellent Story, I wish it was continued. You did a very good job keeping true to the source material, with Characters, Plot, and level of content.

Very Good Story, but I kind of liked Dani and Danny being cousins rather than siblings.

you went from brother/sister in the first chapter back to cousins in this one but otherwise I liked it ;)

Me like. Please update soon i would love to see what happens next.

Nice! This was a good chapter. It is nice to see Phantom and Valerie talking without either one of them flying off the handle. Their conversation felt very realistic, especially since Danny wouldn't give her all of the answers to her questions. At least, not the answers she wanted. This was a really nice wrap-up of the situation post D-stabilized. Thanks for writing!

Awww. This is so great! I love how protective Danny is of her and how he and Jazz are able to include her in a normal family relationship so readily.

That was a really good story. Also, when will you be updating Countdown? Just curious.

cute. a little OOC though. Valerie would never work with Danny. She hates him with a passion. it was still good.

Great fic! Please update the next chapter soon!

Ah, this was excellently written. I didn't think that Valerie had any closure at all at the end of the series. I always imagined their relationship to be similar to this after the D-Stabalized episode. Anyways, you did a splendid job bringing closure to her character.

Take care,

~LGT

Aww, this is really cute! I love Danny when he's overprotective of Danni. It's just so adorable xP

Take care,

~LGT

Nice...really really sweet.