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This, right here, made me cry. It was amazing, u have amazing writing skills, and u do Ed/Roy parental fantastically :) I would love to read more of ur stories on these two, but u dnt have any, so yer :P

Amazing work, amazingly written and I greatly enjoyed the read, keep up the fantastic work :D

Damn, I'm tearing up. Looking (reading) at Ed experiencing some kind of fatherly affection is very heartwarming, and so is Roy giving it away. *Wipes tears*

I think I've read this before, but it was nice to come back and refresh my memory.

Parental!RoyEd always brightens up my day, or... I guess, since it's 1:28 where I am, my extremely early morning. Anyway, this story was so sweet. I remember this part in the anime, and really wish this story was an actual scene. Sigh. I guess we don't always get what we want.

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:D YAY! Roy and Ed bonding time!

I loved this! Mustang would be such a great dad xD If he would just lighten up ;)

Again, excellent work. I love your style, and everyone seems completely in character. Wonderful read :)

Roy, as a father for Edward...
Usually I don't like the idea because the stories are bad, but yours was amazing. :)

Thanks !

Oh poor Ed, Al really hurt his overprotective big brother with a brother complex. But Mustang was sweet about it.

ohmagosh the feels! . absolutely LOVED it. Sweet and sad and oh so believable. *sniff* I'm gonna go cry now...

Can you make a multi chapter story of parental!RoyEd? Please? I really liked this, and there aren't many parentals out there.

I've likened Roy as a father figure to Ed and I think you've captured that here perfectly. :)

Awe, I love it. I think that Roy and Ed were very in character and this something that could have actually happened. Great work!

So great, and yet bittersweet...

Liked this.

awww! so sweet :) in fact, i'd prefer Roy as their father instead of Hoheim