I'd read this before and forgot to review. Interesting take. I felt that Fuji did too much messing around to be forgiven, but Ryoma and I are very different people. The tension at the end when you were switching between scenes was done well. It did slow down a little at the airport, but still worked Thanks for the story.

I liked how you summarize everything in your AN. It made me think back to all the problems and i was suprised I really did learn just those exact things.

*literally sobbing* i was so scared for them! thank you for a roller coaster of emotions in this story (':

How do you constantly think of these stories?
So many with just those two!

I quite curious about what Ryoma would do after he realized that Fuji hasn't been screwing with Seiichi once only but quite a few times in a row. I did Fuji really shoot Seiichi in the end? Did he press the trigger? Cause it kind of seems like Fuji still can not let go of Seiichi and I if was Ryoma I would think Fuji is only trying to get into his pants again after all he has no more toys left, Seiichi died and he broke off with all the others. I mean, even Tezuka could be a witness Fuji never said anything about who his new toy is when they broke up, and Atobe only saw Ryoma getting infatuated with Fuji and not vice versa, furthermore, who knows how long they've been screwing behind Ryoma's back except for maybe Fuji's secretary. Wouldn't Ryoma have doubts from his perspective? Cause i'm sure as he'll having lots!

Wonderful story!

It's really hard to read while crying. I was really moved by this story. Yeah, just like the lyrics of the song entitled "Journey" by 911, "With every twist and turn, I've laughed and cried". I really, really love this one and all of the others stories you've written that I've already read as well but this is one of my favorite..

As I recall I'm crying because of Ryoma but when I came to this line "If you don't fix my brat, I'll fix your face" , I can't help but laugh thanks to Atobe, he never fails to amuse me. And then there comes the breathtaking scene at the airport. Wow, I feel like I just came out from a roller coaster ride. This is really something and you are amazing. Aye, that'd be true.

I love this chapter, I can't ask more anything more interesting than this. And I like the Ryoma here... :)

really nice...

Myyyyyy...this so awesome pic

Kawaii! Loved it!

i loved the whole story.

noooooo
fuji you baka

oh no
the past is back