Reviews for Evolution of Us
seafieldbelowly chapter 2 . 4/16/2015
I'm lovin' it! Blood and sex here u go XDD I love you keep shifting the POV 3
jessicainspace chapter 10 . 4/8/2015
This story is as ironically poetic as it is beautiful. Normally I don't do the whole 1st person thing, but this was just so brilliantly written that I had no choice but to keep reading. How strange that a story can be so horrific at times and yet so sweet in those moments too. I've never read anything quite like this before that's invoked so many conflicting emotions within me, that has cut me so deep and left me sympathetic towards two characters that deserve anything but. And I almost want to say that I'm shocked by the end of this chapter, but going into a story like this I already knew there could be no traditional 'happy ending'. Still, I look forward to any new chapters, as unlikely as it seems after all these years, because it would be nice to know what becomes of Hidan and at the very least, get some closure.

Thanks for sharing this golden piece with us! :)
Hailey chapter 10 . 3/21/2015
Oh god I was rereading some of my favorite facfics and the last time I read this it was at chapter 5. This was such a long time ago and I'm glad I gotta finally read more but I'm sad you never finished it. I doubt ull read this but if u do u did an amazing job and I wish u finished it.
Mo0Chroi chapter 10 . 1/2/2014
Well jesus - I finished this quickly o-o Just two days with gaming breaks I can't wait to see more of this - the relationship is so interesting and they seem so much in character. :D The things that happened in here that cross-over to the manga is a nice touch :D Can't wait to see more (eventually) :3
SilentSable chapter 10 . 12/2/2013
You made me cry lol -_- its a beautiful story!
XxXBittersweet DreamsXxX chapter 9 . 7/6/2013
This is by far the best kakuzu/hidan story on fanfiction that I have read and let me tell you I have read a magnitude of them. I adore how you illustrate the characters completely. They are in tuned with their personailities in the anime. Their is barely a time when the characters are not themselves. I adore how you played out how hidan kills kakuzu and how hidans religion plays out as kakuzu dies. How hidan has that much faith and love to kill kakuzu for his own good even though he did not mean to (if it is like the anime). Thank you for writing this I appreciate its beauty and it has left my heart raw.
Murasaki19 chapter 2 . 3/18/2013
TwT I just notice that, the last update was on 2009 ;w;
Rika Rai Kei chapter 10 . 12/30/2012
i think in all honesty, one of the best i have read yet, please continue
ilovemyboys chapter 10 . 8/4/2012
I can't wait for the next chapter! This has been a wonderful and emotional story!
ilovemyboys chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
Once again, absolutely love it! I love how you encorporated anatomy as well! Great job!
Kipsi chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
I've read only the first chapter of this fan fiction and I'm loving this already.. 8D
The 14th Undertaker chapter 10 . 6/16/2012
Did you know that Hidan didn't die, but he is just sitting in the bottom of that hole? I bet he is bored out of his mind.
The 14th Undertaker chapter 4 . 6/16/2012
Well Kakuzu was being mean!
Mew chapter 10 . 3/19/2012
/sobs oh god please come back and finish this :c this was so beautiful from the beginning to the end. Kakuzu actually reaching inside of Hidan and being able to satiate his bloodlust which in turn satisfied Hidans lust for pain. The 'ending' is so heart wrenching ;A; I've always wondered about them being apart when they died during the anime, and the bonds of their relationship. My emotions 3:
TheWingsOfButterflies chapter 10 . 3/6/2012
Oh god. This is so fantastic I'm at a loss for words. But I shall try nonetheless. Your grammar is excellent, as is your word choice and fluency. You give Kakuzu and Hidan such depth it's rather beautiful. This story truly captures emotions that fit them so well. I truly hope you complete this one day, and I shall eagerly wait what is sure to be a stunning conclusion.
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