This story is short, but full of so much excitement, and a good plot! Really enjoyed it, liked how you twisted the events at the Astronomy Tower to suit the story. :) Great work!

Brilliant story :) Would like to read more, maybe a sequel?

0oh great one-shot! :)

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huh.. in the middle I was scared a bit, cause I couldn't find out what you intended to do with the story, but now, I can say: congratulations! I really liked the unusual plot, and that they were mostly in character - excluded Flitwick. It was the one tiny bit I wasn't totally satisfied with, though the explanation was good for it. (I mean that who'd have thought that he's evil.)And the very end was very good:) (sequel?-i have to check it out)

I really enjoyed this! Well-executed, and a creative premise. I was half-expecting another generic romance fic, but I should have known better. :) After just a few paragraphs, I knew I was in for a good read.

The story just begs for a sequel...

Best,

RC

Q.E.D.? what does that stands for? :-/ oh please please!:(( you should've continued this!

I love the story good job! You should continue it haha, i want to know what happens when she finds him again

please write more! you cannot honestly tell me that you're going to leave such an amazing story unfinished!

Just found your story. Very interesting idea. This is the only one I'vbe read that had Flitwick as the villain. Well written too.

That was a brilliant fic! Sequel please!

This was brilliant! I love this story! Please do a follow-up! I would love to see what happens when she finds him! But even if you don't, I am completely happy with this one! Fantastic!

I have a hard time believing in evil!Flitwick...oh come on, the short guy's adorable! Hem. But that was a brilliantly creative story, and ended very sweetly as well. Great job!

Wow. This is excellent. Inventive, well written, original. *hugs*

Excellent!

Can we expect more to this story? I would lovee to read more of this stroy.