Whoot! Great job! Thanks for writing and sharing!

So wait, did Kenpachi kill Byakuya? I'm not sure if I understand.

Awesome, loved it!

aw you left me hanging..please write a second part

Squee! I like this! Muwahahaha! Please write more!

I really liked it! I'm just sad it ended at that point. I love how Kenpachi broke through all the pain.

PLEASE DX a sequel would be VERY much appreciated XD very good job by the way XD

KYAH KENBYA MY FAVORITE !

I loved it. They were so much in character and... wow. Loved it.

Good job ! Keep up !

This is lovely. I could easily picture the action and I think you kept them both in character. More please...?

... I love you. Do you have any idea how difficult it is to find and decent KenBya? Ugh. I notice that you haven't tagged this as "Complete" yet, does that mean that you are planning on writing more? Won't get my hopes up too much, but let me just say that I may just have to either "hunt you down and gut you like a fish" if you DON'T write more, or build a temper in your honor if you DO continue.

twisted ove...like this fic

Byakuya was struck by the hopeful puppy look on his face, recovered, then began again.

I. . . can't. . . breathe! But I can totally see that.

That was pretty good!

I don't care if this is a crack pairing, I freaking LOVE it.

Excellent work, love the ending!

Well, I like the whole fighting as foreplay thing. To be honest, I'd never expect something like Zaraki/Byakuya pairings, but you make it seriously believable. I hope you have a second one either up or on the way.