Dude, I'm about to cry! Why would you write this? xd
Besides the sadness that this story induces, it's really good. Really good.
I don't know if you'll ever read this review, but..

Dude, this is amazing.. I'm shocked.

- Shocked

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did he just...? omygod. great story!

great story

GOOD very good! loved it

So he died...well then, that was a little different, but very very

Well I'm a little late to this... like ten years too late... but oh my God. Wow. After reading my mind was buzzing like a beehive, it took me like ten minutes to finally chill out. Best oneshot I've ever read. By far. Well written, the scene was set beautifully and the ending was simply shocking and stunning. I couldn't speak after I finished reading, I could only stare at my phone wide eyed and my mouth agape. So. Freaking. Amazing. Definitely one of my favorite stories you've made. You're such an amazing writer! EEEEEEEEE! I bow down to you now, you beautiful person, you. Thank you for blessing the internet and future generations with your gorgeous contributions to a well loved show that we shall all carry deep within our hearts... or at least I still have a place in my heart for it... nevertheless, this story is its own legacy aaaaand I'm gonna shut up now XD (good job tho!)

Well...saddening.

You need to write one more chapter about how raven deals with it, you have to, YOU HAVE TO!

you know what's weird. I don't even know if you're still writing, this story is from like 8 years ago (god 2007 seems like eons ago) . regardless it's absolutly brilliant ( and ie read it way to many times). but hey if you still exist it's always nice to hear good words about your work.

Holy mother of plot twists. Fucking Christ. I have nothing to say but wow. Good job, bro.

Damn, that's cold.

Given his power set, I doubt a nine story drop would keep him down for long.

That was intense, man.

*Clap* *Clap* *Clap* Good job!

:C