| Reviews for Massive Gear |
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MidnightMaddi chapter 1 . 8/1/2014 This ending is golden! I love it! |
NobodieZ chapter 1 . 6/1/2011 Nice Little sotry. |
umm chapter 1 . 1/4/2011 okay that was funny. good job! |
The Dragon Lover chapter 1 . 6/13/2008 OMG, that was HILARIOUS! (is laughing guts out) No, seriously, that was AWESOME! I love how Storm was like "RUN!" and then Jet was like "What?" and then he saw Amy and yelled "SCATTER!" XD Seriously, that was an awesome idea! Nice work, even thought it was scientifically impossible as Tails said! But, race now, ask questions later, right? X3 ~DL ('Dragon Lover') |
Nintendo Mania chapter 1 . 1/13/2008 Hehe, what a strange read that was. Very interesting story. The last line was certainly something I never would expect anyone to ever say. Good job on making something unique. |
Ice the frosty cat chapter 1 . 1/13/2008 Very nice. It suffers from too much speech and not enough description like mine, but that's ok. Just keep practicing your writing until it's better Take a look at mine if you want. I think it's quite original :) |
Cupcake the Fox chapter 1 . 1/5/2008 *starts clapping* YAY! AMY SAVED THE DAY! *hugs author* You know maybe you can make a sequel to this story. |
JJTHENOOB chapter 1 . 11/19/2007 dude now that was funnyy dude if it wasnt for the fact that its a one shot i would say wright more hahaha she still cant get him rockon dude you rule ha hahahaha |
AshRB chapter 1 . 7/27/2007 Sorry I didn't review before I faved this. I was in a hurry. I loved how you kept everyone in character! Most fics *coughMINEcough* have a hard time staying in character while still being funny. You also stayed true to the game. This is also rarely seen. And Amy is my 2nd favorite character so any fic where she is the hero gets even more kudos! :D All-in-all: Awesome fic! |
NUTCASE71733 chapter 1 . 6/30/2007 Oh man, this was hilarious! I felt like I was watching an old Roadrunner and Wily E. Coyote cartoon! |
A ramdom reader chapter 1 . 6/25/2007 The Sonic Riders fanfiction "The Massive Gear" is a refreshing and humorous story that does a solid job of providing a fresh read while keeping the personalities of the Sonic characters intact. The story does a good job of making sure the reader has some knowledge of the backstory and characters before moving to the main theme, which happens to the put a few characters in some sticky situations at crucial moments. The story decides to take a more cartoonish like turn to these moments, and this makes the story more accessible to a wide audience. There are minor errors here and there in terms of grammar and spelling, but it doesn't ruin the reading experience. "The Massive Gear" is recommended to anyone looking for a good laugh and a story that's a worthy read and time-friendly. |
Grey-X chapter 1 . 6/6/2007 I've said it before, but this is the best Sonic fic that deals with this theme. And coming from someone who hates Sonic spinoffs with the zealousness of an abortion protester, that's saying a lot. I don't know how a sequel to this would work, but if you write one, I'll be first in line to read it. |
Nyago chapter 1 . 6/3/2007 Hhahaha...Amy won been huge. XD Thats cute and creative! :D I like it! Too bad Sonic still doesn't want her, make me sad! If this is the end, is pretty good but if you continue just as good! ~Nyago |
RikkuMcClowFox chapter 1 . 6/3/2007 This is awesome! So creative! You don't see many Amy and Sonic Riders stories! The only problem was that it took me 3 hours to read it all! Not that i'm complaining! I hope that you write a sequel! I especially liked the end! |