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This fanfiction reminds me of saw in a way. Really good though and not as gruesome as saw. Thank God. Really good. Just a tip, ellipsis is only three full stops, no more.

Unicorns4eva

ok i thake that back i miss read it BUT i agree with mouther-of-two you could have changed it so they could have moved around some of the tests or 'games' as victoria put it for e.g carlisle is a doctour so he could have drunken donated human blood and not killed a human..and esme someone like rosalie could have stood at the bottom or sit on a lower ledge of the cliff and caught the baby

loved the story rite till the last two chapters...i would haved liked to have read a bit more detail into bellas transformation hence i got confused when you skiped right to the honeymoon because i thought edward was halusanating

Hi, I would've liked to say I loved ur story, it had a great plot & all, but I hated the way you portrayed the Cullens... that they would do anything to save Bella, even if it means sacrificing human lives which they supposedly cherish...And you pictured it in a way that they didn't think so much about it, as if nothing in the world matters except saving Bella, no matter how many lives they take, no matter everything they worked for, The Cullens would never do that... U could've at least tried to change the plot or make them find a way to work around Victoria's demands... The baby thing was very cruel by the way! I wanted to like this story but I just can't... sorry.

Death and imagination? I know it's too late, but I promise I didn't skip forward. I know the first one's right, but I'm a little unsure about the other. Great story by the way.

X

great plot line and story, but i will say i didnt like all the AN stuff. one of them was longer then the chapter.

omg brill

your evil for stopping!

A book

it was good

CAN YOU STOP WITH ALL OF THE AN'S IT IS DRIVENG ME NUTS AND MAD

I love the story very good. But I can't seem to find the sequel 2 it can u tell me what it is because I would love 2 read it

I think I hate you-but I'm not sure JUST POST THE SEQUEL ALREADY!

Um...I'm confused... I REALLY LOVED THIS STORY! But I can't find the sequel... Did you even make it? Or did you make it then delete it? Or just never do it? Cause I can't find it on your author page. I REALLY wanted to read it too after reading the sneak peak! Anyways, I thought that this story was EXCELLENT! I can't wait to read another one of your stories! YOUR GREAT AT WRITTING SUSPENSE! :]

- Emberseve