Well your predictions were off

It’d hard to remember that everything I know from DH (and Pottermore (I don’t care what it’s called now)) isn’t known pre-DH, but there was a lot of time for people to create theories, which I had no chance to come up with, given how soon after HBP I read DH. So stuff like Regulus would be guessed but the details wouldn’t be known. Plus things like the animagus transformation isn’t elaborated on till after DH was published.

At first I thought the third person was Peter, but Snape is also a small possibility. It will be interesting to see how much each of them support the DE, either way.

One thing that bothers is using Lupin to refer to Remus like isn't he James friend?

i love percy and snape to be important character!

greeeeeeaaatttt storyyyyy amazingggg endiiingggg! perfectooooo!

this chapter is scary, d
veru dark and sad. but then snape is our hero! yeeeess

why not use time turner and save harry parent?

ahh i hope snape in light side.

yeyeyeyeee reggie! snape next please

why time traveling story peter always can escape?

yyeeeeehahaaaaa reggie is alive

hope regulus still alive

“expert” - “excerpt”

Otherwise, pretty good. I have only two problems: a) speed … we are in the twentieth chapter and not much happened yet (you do recall that HPPS, the book which made JKR famous, was seventeen chapters, right?), b) Harry has a girlfriend whom he hasn’t sent a letter whole Summer, nor he did broke up with her yet (which he should, because obviously he has no feelings for her). I don’t like my main hero being a complete jerk, without a good reason.

ı really dont understand why they use stuppfy in life and death senarios use bombarda diffindo sectumsempra go for the maim or kill

Are you planning on writing a sequel for this story?