What is the point in writing fanfiction if you're just retelling Canon scene for scene?

For the love of god. Please stop rewriting this scene.

I have to say that it was a good story, even if it was your first. I really liked your team 7 and that haku lived ;)

Hey!
I know it's been year s since you've updthis fic, but I was wondering if it was possible that tu you tell us the name of the people who adopted it?
Thanks and have a good day~
Lily

Will you please stop making homophobic comments like "but it wood b evan moor GROSS if it waz a guy lolol" that's exactly what your writing looks like when you make childish remarks. Idk if you are trying to be in the mindset of a 12 year old guy or they're your own personal views, but either way it's offensive.

I was eating ramen whil reading this!

Yon is Minato, right?

a good chapter as allways

i can awnser them most likly

i can read the future they are going to pass AND ONCE AGAIN another good chappy

"if it was a boy that would be wrong"

he he he little did they know in another universe anyway loved it again

just thought id point this out

"Narue sat in a tree, swinging his legs back and forth"

i like this story but it seem a bit family hmm was this based on some other fic or somthing or is it just me meh anyway i loved it

You need to add more detail, yes she is wearing a red shirt but... how is she wearing it? is it baggy? is it tight on her body? what kind of pants does she wear? how large are her breasts, orange? melon? or ridiculous? how long is her hair? is it short? medium? long? how far does it reach? how tall is she? stuff like that.

Awww i understand, but i hope that you will come back and add another chapter, just for us ;)

Wish you'd update soon! :/ But oh well *sigh*..