That was a really good chapter. I liked seeing the different pregnancies and how it was dealt with. I also really liked how Will was over protective and that was the cause of their second fight. I love how both Ana and Jack talked to them and then Will and Elizabeth's make up.

I love how Teague is teaching Sammi the guitar. The interactions between the grandkids and their grandfathers is really good.

Of course Elizabeth would end up going into labor...I'm realy worried because of how hard the last one was. I hope Will can make it back before too long and that Elizabeth will be okay.

I love how you brought in the blacksmith and Will wanting to make swords for everyone.

This was a really great chapter. Can't wait to read more.

I love the interaction between the Sparrows and Turners, it fits. And Will and Elizabeth's is so sweet. Teague and Faith are cute together, I think they fit together quite nicely.

I really do love William and Sammi's relationship, it's really nice to read and so real. That conversation was hilarious! I completely loved it. And the dream at the end was so sad, but I could see William doing that. Great job on her thoughts and how real the dream was.

Of course Calypso and Beckett would be plotting. That's so not fair, I don't know how they're going to get out of that plan of Calypso and Beckett's. I do hope they do. I can't wait to read the rest.

Great job.

I really liked this chapter, I think you did a great job with the rescue of Ana. The fight scene was well done, and I like how Will was able to sneak up on them, Jack acting crazy to distract the guards was just perfect.

I was right about Faith, and I love how William was able to lift the curse from her. It was so sweet on his part, as soon as he realized I knew he couldn't do it. Sammi is right about the Turner men and their nobility. :) I wonder how they'll get him cured now.

And I actually don't know what other ship you're talking about, although once you tell me I'm sure it will have been something so obvious.

Simon's punishment was just perfect, I love how Jack did one that fit the crime.

Elizabeth is pregnant! That's awesome. I can imagine part of Will's panic at the thought of Jack knowing before he was because of last time.

Very great job on the whole thing. I loved this chapter. Can't wait to read more.

That was really good and wow. I was not expecting that guy to be the one who raped and killed her sister. That was absolutely crazy! Poor Ana.

Okay, first that was a horrible fight between Jack and Ana. I knew that Ana should stop, but it was kind of nice that Jack realized how it must have felt for her. Even though I know that it doesn't make it right.

Simon is crazy, poor Ana, when she wasn't feeling good I wondered if maybe something was with her drink and it was. At least Jack was able to hear her, although hopefully Will and Teague will catch up with him in time so he can find her.

The whole thing with Faith was interesting...I have an idea as to why she's like that, but I'm not sure.

I don't think you overstepped in the raping discussion, so I think you're good.

Great job on this chapter, I can't wait to read the next one.

I loved this chapter. I really love the Will/Elizabeth stuff in it, you capture it so beautifully. I love his presents, they're so thoughtful and considerate and perfect.

I love how you still have Sammi and William's bond, they drawing, and then the swimming, that was so cute. I love how Sammi realized that she had a crush on William, it was adorable.

The talk...I think you did a great job with it, it was so funny, but you could tell how hard it was for both of them.

I enjoyed Teague's and Jack's talk, it was just right, not too much, but just the right stuff. It's sad that Teague is going to die, but it's good that it allowed him to have Jack back in his life along with Jack's whole family, and more. I think I know who Teague meant about staying in the family.

Great job on this chapter, can't wait to find out what happens.

That was a really great chapter. I enjoyed the Will/Elizabeth and Jack/Ana stuff in there.

I do like how the teacher was worried, the whole conversation was really good, and I like how she didn't believe right away.

I love how you didn't make Teague living with the Sparrows an easy thing, it fits him much better. How embarrasing for Ana and Jack and Teague when he walked in.

Great chapter, I really enjoyed reading it. Can't wait to read more.

That was really good. I enjoyed the Will and Elizabeth stuff a lot, it was quite nice to read it. I loved how they did have a problem and things were not perfect, but once things were realized they handled it quite well. And the bandana...I do agree.

Anyways, loved Teagues stories, I think you do such a great job with all of that because you really delve into it and make it more real, if that makes sense.

Great chapter, can't wait for the next one.

That was really good. I love both Jack/Ana and Will/Elizabeth's conversations, they were really well done and addressed important issues. I'm glad Ana talked to Jack about Teague. Interesting thoughts that both Will and Elizabeth had. I hope they don't have to turn to Calypso for help.

I love the whole thing with Jack's father, I think you handled it quite nicely. And I didn't know that he was based off of Blackbeard, so that was cool to hear that and see it in the story. I love his reactions to Will, Sammi and Teague, that was really cute.

And it looks like Teague does know who can help them, so that'll be cool to find out and to see their journey. Great chapter.

I really like how you handled the immortality thing here. I'm glad that Jack came to get Will and Elizabeth, still letting them have some time to calm down and talk by themselves. Poor Will, it wasn't his fault at all.

I like how they explained it to William about it, and I actually did like how you had him think it was cool at first before understanding what it would really mean.

Having Will and William have that time by themselves was really good and I think very helpful to them both.

I did love the whole part with Sammi and William at the end. You really showed the love and dependency the two have for each other. Sammi going over and then staying there when he requested it. And William confiding in her, it was all just very sweet. And I love how he doesn't want to worry his parents with it.

I am worried about what it is that will help them, I know that Calypso knows and that really worries me.

Great chapter, I can't wait to read the next one.

William is immortal! I did not see that coming. I would have just assumed he was mortal you know?

Great chapter. I like the back story with Teague, showing who he was and he and Jack's relationship. I'm glad that William was okay, but that's horrible. I think you did a great job with everyone's reaction especially Will's.

That was really good. I love the conversation that Jack and Ana have, her finally telling him that whole story was really good and showed that their bond is strong. I like how you came up with a back story for her that was interesting and fit her.

Poor Will, I am so glad that he told Elizabeth, it would be horrible if she heard about it elsewhere. I love the conversation that they had involving the whole thing. Their moment was quite sweet.

The swordfight between Jack and Will was really funny and quite well done. I enjoyed their exchange and Sammi and Williams' responses.

I love how Will and Elizabeth were able to talk and become reacquianted with each other in all the ways. Great job with this chapter. Can't wait to read the next one.

I'm so glad that all Elizabeth needed was rest and food/drink, at least it won't be a long recovery, but one that will be important. And I love how Will told her that he wanted to wait to ensure that she was better, it was so sweet.

I love Will's meeting with Sammi and finding out about Ana and Jack and some of the things that had happened. It was so sweet when Will was worried about how Elizabeth felt when she went to Port Royal alone and what had happened. But I'm glad that Elizabeth told him that he didn't have to do that.

This was a really great chapter, and I love the sweetness and love that you can feel coming from Will and Elizabeth. You did such a great job at their reunion. I can't wait to read more.

Wow that was really good. For me I thought perhaps Elizabeth would be sent back, but when it got to how she immediately joined his crew, it was a bit off only because of William, and then when she didn't quite want to talk about how Beckett knew about the curse, that was when I started wondering. It was confirmed when she said "You're quite desirable yourself." I was so glad that Bootstrap was there to help Will. Poor Will, of course he would still feel horribly, kissing is also not so good.

I'm glad that Elizabeth wasn't wounded to badly. And I'm so glad that Bootstrap will be able to be with his family again.

I love how you brought in the part at the end of At World's End, it fit in so nicely. And even though I wanted it to go completely smoothly, I'm glad that it didn't, it gave it a bit more. And I love how Will, William and Elizabeth were all able to help figure out which was Calypso. I do wonder what it is that she's talking about, I really hope everything is okay.

I love the reunion that Will and William had, it was so sweet.

Great job on this chapter, I can't wait to read the next one.

Of course they couldn't have smooth sailing. That was so frustrating, but I'm glad that Jack was able to catch up to the EITC and rescue Elizabeth. But now she's been shot! I know that she can't die...but Will saw her...it's so horrible. I hope things are going to be fine...she can't die at sea.

I like the extra details you put in with the children, including Jack and Ana's newest Teague. I love the thoughts that both Will and Elizabeth are having since they are so close to seeing each other.

Great job, I can't wait to read the next chapter.

I really like how you had William and Sammi discover the truth about Will. Going to the library, getting Octavius to read the chapter, and then when the teacher explained the whole thing. It was all very well done. And I loved reading the description of the battle from the teacher, even though it wasn't a ton, it was still really cool.

I'm glad that Sammi made the connection, but I'm glad that it took William some time. The talk that he and Elizabeth had was really good, and I love how she showed him the chest.

Now the whole thing is out in the open between the five of them which is good.

I can't wait for Will to come back! Great job on this chapter, and I loved Harry Potter 7 too. I know it's been a few years, but I just had to say it.