Hnnng, I've wait so long for Genma's turn. Other than that, you took shinobi system into something interesting, maybe OOC but I still like it! Hope you come back!

Love this! I hope it is not abandoned.

Update,please.

Why didn't you finish this ?

Yuck. Talk about Stockholm syndrome.

Oh god please tell me this is not abandoned. I think this has become one more f my favourites!

I absolutely love this story. I found it before I had an account on and as soon as I created one, it was added to my favorites. I've always been very bad about leaving comments but since I'm trying to change that, I decided to leave one here.

This fic's amazing and I love the power dynamics shown in it. Your writing's perfect for conveying that sense of relationships. I can read this fic over and over again. Thanks so much for writing it.

or not tbc since its been almost ten years lol

surprising and cute

Wow Ibiki is kind of an asshole in this. People are so mean to Iruka in your fic. LOL do you have a thing against him

finally a conversation. Gasp! how novel. JK . love it

Iruka is a bit of a tool in this. Of course I appreciate his role in this... I like this story a lot. I also am enjoying how complicated the characters are. I think the most likeable person in this whole thing is Raidou which is a bit sad but also what makes this story enjoyable. Well these are my impressions. .

well if they didn't like Iruka's temper they wouldn't have hired him/ tried to pursue him. I don't think he's in that much trouble because obviously it's a lovers spat so it really seems like Ibiki would understand. But still poor Iruka. You really are giving him a hard time putting him with those two! lol

im glad they ended up reconciling though its hard to swallow that since they were so mean to him. I am leaning towards liking this though so I don't think there's anything wrong with it since they did convince him gently and he made his own choice. I think your writing is amazing, well thought out, and very exciting. However I would like a little more warning like having them flirt or SOMETHING to indicate how this was going to go. Jeez I was sweating there for the first few chapters.

Iruka should have slapped his face. This is very hot but I must say if they did that to me I'd claw their eyes out.