loving every second I read this Story. amazing. thanks for writing it

Nicely done.

Awesome story. 3

I love reading this story over and over. I thought I'd give you a grammar tip, since I know that English isn't your first language. The contractions I'll or I'm are used at the beginning of sentences and never alone. You often would say something like, "Don't worry, I'll." And my brain would have to pause to understand the sentence because it's looking for what comes after the I'll. What it should have said is, "Don't worry, I will." Just a little tip that will help the reading be smoother. Good luck! :)

I just love this. And wanted to send some encouragement to write more. You have some interesting that are incomplete, and I really like the ideas for the 2 fics that you had at the top of this chapter. Love to read more of your work. :)

Loved the story line. Why didn't you ever write one or both of the other storylines you mentioned. (Love and music or Family ties) They both sound like they would be interesting to read. Please update soon. Thanks

great story! loved seeing v and logan raise an adorable family

I love you story. Easy read. :)

Veronica Mars go upstairs and let other people handle the case?
Not likely - she would be right in the middle of it, even if she was pregnant
She is not the damsel in distress type, who lets theMEN handle all the hard stuff
She would be the one to find out who was threatening her family

V would not have waited until the feds arrived, she would have insisted on seeing the boxes right away

I really don't see why V has to give up her job, which is something I really don't see her doing, she is not the stay at home type, has she said she worked hard to get where she is
Besides in this day and age it is ok for a woman to be a wife, mother, and have a career
I don't see Logan offering to quit and be a stay at home dad
Unless she plans to go back to being a PI, now tht I can see, better hours to be with her family, and to live back in Neptune

This story was just plain adorable. I loved the way you wrote it and even though there were some grammar issues, it didn't detract from the story.
Thanks for a great read! I'm slowly edging my way back into the VM fandom, so I really needed this :D

Happy writing!

I absolutely loved this story especially Logan's speech at the end it was awesome

A nice story, loved it xx

Great story i love it