Would love for you to continue this story!

Why are you wasting two chapter already on these stupid confrontations with girls at Bella's school in Phoenix. Nobody cares. That's not what I want to read about. A small paragraph about how she had issues with girls at school would have sufficed. So far, I really dislike how you wrote this. So dramatic and stupid, focusing on situations completely irrelevant to the plot.

I really dislike the facial piercings. I just can't get past that to enjoy the story.

I know it’s been like 8 years buuuuutttt... can you like finish?

Interesting story so far, I hope you update soon.

Up-the-fuck-date! Thanks!

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Ohmygod this is so good! You really are a talented writer! I hope that some day you’ll decide to update this fic once again. And if you choose not to and I never review this again, I hope you’re doing well!

OMG u should totally continue it id soo good

Please finish this story!

This is a great story. The plot is very intriguing. I loved it and hope that you will think about completing this one day. I would love to know what happened next.

So where is it?

If she had the power to control minds, then doesn't she use it for them to ignore her? I think you wanted to make an I-don't-care-if-people-accept-me-or-not-badass-charachter but that sadly didn't project in your writing. Bella seemed more attention seeking and a bit stupid. She could have just not do all the piercings and emo outfits so she wouldn't be called a freak. Also she could have just put thoughts in their head not to confront her when they bully her making them completely forget what they are about to do. The way the story was written only made it seem like Bella is an immature teenager and she may be academically wise but has absolutely no street smarts.

Is 6 years enough time to update? I don't mean to sound rude but I've read this story tons of times and it's awesome and I really hope it gets continued cx

This is an amazing story. The Bella you've created is better than the original character with more depth and flaws. Please continue this story, I think it has great potential to be one of the best twilight fanfics.