This is so sweet I cannot help but smile

Except their son is actually called Henry

this is a fantastic story... Will is my favorite character (in this story but also in general)
i know i'm reading this a bit late after it was posted, but it's still really good

oh my gosh... so sad...poor will he's my favorite!
it's really good though

This is awesome!

whats up with all the clintons?

I hope you realize that what Elizabeth said to Clinton is almost the same as what Hermoine Grainger said to Severus Snape in the Harry Potter series. Only thing is she said, "YOU FOUL, LOATHSOME EVIL LITTLE COCKROACH!" Not foal, that's a baby horse.

The song was in the wrong order and some words were wrong but I like the story.

I think you have done an amazing job writing this. I really feel like it's something that should have happened in the fourth movie. I can picture everything and you did such a good job. I don't know if you want read these anymore because it's like 8 years later. But I finally watched the movie that was so popular when I was little, and I loved it. Very good job!

Let me begin by saying that I read this fanfiction directly after I finish the last movie, at worlds end. To me it was the absolute perfect ending to the trilogy; perfect amounts of violence, romance, adventure, and authenticity. So many parts left me in tears, and left me to feel joy in the series. Ignoring the couple of spelling mistakes, or a couple of minor insignificant details, your story was one of the best fanfictions I've ever read. This was a beautiful story with beautiful writing, and the perfect way to end the series.

I must admit , I nearly cried at some passages ... I am just astonished at your talent.. I can't even get your story out of my head... Well , I am ready to write one by myself , I hope , and ... see ya at world's end , mate !

Oh , God, I love cliffhangers ! And the idea of making Elizabeth pregnant ? BRILLIANT , mate ! It is just perfect the way you reflect the true personality of the characters in all these situations ... I just think you are meant to be a writer ... Bye-aye , matey !

Darling , you made me cry at this chapter ! God, it was so funny , yet emotional ... Lol, Jack wanted to eat the cake first ... Damn it , I am SO curious of how chapter 17 will be ... Ciao , mate !

I so love your story MORE ! I didn't knew that was possible ... Anyway , thanks for including Captain Jack Sparrow in this tory , cause he's one of my fav characters EVER ! I just feel you are a great writer , and it's true ! Great humor , awesome adventures , brilliant ideas and perfect characters and happenings ... You are a genius , mate ! :-)

OMG ! OMG ! OMG ! BEST W.E. STORY EVEEEER ! Oh my god , it's just perfect ! You , now , are my best friend , pal. I really love your story ! It is just perfect , oh my god ! I mean , sure , it is very humorous , but it is one of the best fanfiction story about The Pirates of the Caribbean I've read , so... good luck ! Write other stories !