It's really a good story about Remadora.i love this couple,but it's very sad that they died at the and Tonk's lovelife appear to be very dull just like a glass of rinsing,but it's touching indeed.I read the Chinese translation of this story,feel very interested in it,and I decided to read the English original writing skill is brilliant and the storyline is very close to original work.I'm only a young reader of yours,a Chinese girl and a Harry Potter fan, think my English skill is not very good and some words re like Chinglish.I don't understand slangs,if there is something wrong,I'm very sorry,and I think I should practice more.

GAH! I love this fic!

Hi~I love Remus too~It is so great to see him fine and happy, and read his love story, though J. has overlooked it. Great that someone would write that~Thank you~

I love this story very much！

End of the summer! This is December! But really, what's the difference? None at all in Texas, that's for sure. I love this; it actually works quite well for an ending chapter. The only problem with this story is something you can't change - why is Remus so incredibly stupid for so long? It's insane! I definitely agree with Tonks on that count. And on most others, as she's usually right. Small corrections from my inner editor: you always, without fail, spell 'definitely' as 'defiantly.' It's starting to get on my nerves. You also need to clear up the uses of 'they're,' 'their,' and 'there;' 'you're' and 'your;' and 'then' and 'than.' 'They're' is the contraction for 'they are;' 'their' is possessive, and 'there' refers to a place. Again, 'you're' is the contraction for 'you are,' and 'your' is possessive. 'Then' refers to a place in time; 'than' makes a comparison (Ex: You are better THAN I am). Also, I may have already said this, but 'c'mon' is the contraction for 'come on' - 'come'on,' as far as I know, is incorrect. No offense, just ... correct grammar and spelling makes it easier to read.
Cheers! You're doing great! :)

I like, but - don't take this wrongly, but - well, there were a few, er, errors, that were, ahem, consistent. Just little things: Metamorphagus, the g was left out sometimes; definitely was spelled as defiantly more than once; the contraction for 'come on' is c'mon, not come'on; and there were a few sentences that could have been better (active verbs are much more powerful than the 'to be' verbs: am, are, is, was, were ...), but all in all, it's a really good start. Brilliant! :)

Also was that a Vicar of Dibley reference? It's gotta be; the proposal scenes are way too similar to be a coincidence. Love it!

This is one of my favorite Remadora stories of all time! I'm sad it's incomplete, but actually I think where you left it is a great ending, so you could just change the story to "Complete" if you wanted to. I thought Tonks' desperation and persistent love was written to perfection, and the way you wrote Remus is exactly how I picture him. His self-deprecation, his gentlemanliness, his morality, his constant internal struggle-it was all written so believably in-character. And the timing of Remus' proposal was wonderful! You really surprised me; I did not see it coming, but it makes complete sense and it's now my headcanon that Remus asked Tonks to marry him in just that way. He would feel so loved and love her so much in that moment...of course those words would spill forth. I could rave about this story all day, I'm telling you. Your writing flows in a really lovely way, and I enjoyed this story more than I can properly express. If you have the desire to continue this tale, I would be ecstatic to read more, but regardless, I love your work and am so grateful you wrote these beautiful words.

awwww these are sad/cute

I love this. If your still alive you should update. This is the best Remus/Tonks story I have ever read. Please update if your still out there!

So three weeks turned into...what five years? This must be how mt readers feel! Are you going to finish this? It's really good!

Metamormagi not Metamorphous for plural.

I'm intrigued and going to go on to the next chapter but you have a lot of repeated words and grammatical errors. I would say go through and proofread again to make sure you get everything.

I absolutely love this story! It is one of the greatest Lupin and Tonks stories that I have had the opportunity to read on this site. Their relationship is so sweet! I loved how you created the point that their relationship could not happen, in Remus' mind, but you didn't make it way too drawn out and boring. You kept it interesting and always had something new around the corner. I realized when I was almost done reading this fic that it was incomplete. I am terribly depressed that you have stopped. I know it has been quite a long time since you last updated this story, but I was wondering if it was at all possible for you too finish it. I would be eternally greatful if you did, and it would make me extremely happy. Thank you for taking the time to write this amazing story. You are a brilliant author, and I hope you keep up the amazing work!:)

I love that you call her "Fanny". It's funnier than "Phlegm" to these American ears. (with all due props to goddess JKR, of course).