Why the fuck write shit like this? Forgiveness and why the hell is 4th's name Arashi? Was minato bad or something? Fuck this shit and your shitty writing.

That was soo good

I hope to see this come back. Great novel!

Please continue this story!

I love it cannot wait to see what you have next

this story is so good, you left it at a cliffhanger for me i hope you do come back and work on this story!

I think I'm going to throw up with all this shit about forgiveness and not letting the past cloud you, the thing is past experiences make up almost everything about yourself, I hate naruto because it's stupid, unrealistic and happy go lucky and most people don't bother changing naruto into someone who is interesting and someone people who aren't completely fucking optimistic want to kill

I hate the completely retarded forgiveness naruto has if this has this the author is shit

wish you would continue this story. It is a well done and believable adaptation of canon.

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I dearly hope you find it within yourself to continue this fabulous tale.

So awesome!

This was a very heart-warming chapter.

Cool AU.

It truly is a shame that a gem of a story such as this one hasn't been updated for so long and is in all likelihood abandoned.