| Reviews for Forsaken |
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  jk chapter 3 . 11/20/2016 so bellas gonna be scary skinny FOREVER? |
 pgrabinEdward chapter 4 . 10/25/2011 Great writing again! I would love to see where you were going with this- will Bella be a typical newborn?... |
| Arraya chapter 4 . 7/15/2010 wow this is very interesting, and different in a very good way, from many other fics. PLEASE another chapter soon? Thanks! |
| haylee21 chapter 4 . 5/19/2010 are you gonna finish? |
| Dazzled17 chapter 4 . 4/22/2010 I love this story! please update soon! |
| BriseisRose chapter 3 . 2/23/2010 This is such an amazing story! Please don't tell me you've given up on it! This has been published in 2007 and only 2 chapters. You've only updated it for an alert; please please please continue this! It's so good! The writing is amazing! The story seems really cool. I think that she's going to wake up like Alice did...no memories. I'm dying to know. If you need any help at all writing the story, writer's block or grammer, anything, I can definitely help! Anything to get this story continued. I feel like if finished, it could be one of my favorites! You kept to the characters so well. I'm guessing there's a wolf at the end of the chapter. And you make it seem like Jasper's in the room with me! Lol. Your choice of words and pathos make the reader tense, sad, emotions pertaing to the story. Please update soon! XOXO |
| MeadowM3 chapter 3 . 1/21/2010 Dear Storms, I'm reading through all your work posted on FanFiction and completly enjoying every word! It looks like it's been a couple of years since you've posted a new story/chapter, have you moved on to writing of FanFiction stories? Do you post under another name now? I'd love to ready more of your work about Twilight or anything else. Please let me know where else I can find your stories. Thanks so much, Meadow |
| BlindLittleRain chapter 3 . 9/10/2009 Well done! Updates, it is fantastic. |
| sammy55 chapter 3 . 7/16/2009 Did you maybe quit? Or did you mean to leave me dangling, wondering if Bella would live or not? Loved this but I want to know what happens! |
| gilo chapter 1 . 4/26/2009 oh you cant leave it there thats just mean! fin the story! :) |
| Stellar Luna chapter 3 . 3/21/2009 wow, this is a really really good story,, i cant wait for the updates :D lol from chloe |
| Emily M. Whitlock chapter 3 . 3/19/2009 but but but, no, you can't just end it there, I hate cliffhangers. What's going to happen? please please start writing again |
| FallenCharmed chapter 3 . 2/5/2009 Please tell me you are going to continue. |
| MgaoqiaoM chapter 3 . 12/29/2008 please keep writing... I want to see what happens! |
| Bobmacbobinstine chapter 3 . 12/22/2008 Omg you have to finish this it is amazing! |
