Very cute. You could however improve it by writing more detailedly about Elizabeth's emotions, and her reasoning behind the choices she makes in the fic.

Beautiful!

Thanks for the continuation!

Entirely beautiful.

A great story. Very good.

i think this is absolutley magnificent.

OH. MY. GOD.

I loved it, you write really well! I especially liked the part when Elizabeth started to cry in front of Jack..

oh, I love it! I love it, I love it, I love it!

did you, I wonder, stay after the credits to watch the little scene? it was cute...possibly my favorite part of the movie.

anyway, excellent job. definitely going under my favorites. :)

warm regards,

dark-hearted rose

Aww...I love it, it was so cute :D

Great work! Loved the look at Elizabeth's life. Glad they gave her the water.

wonderful story! I'm glad you kept it short, it seem to fit. I'm amused by how the town folks view elizabeth, because I've pondered about it myself, especially if she had become pregnant and all (very bad reputation during that particular time period for a lady) and I think you did a wonderful job of capturing what I had been thinking into words. Please write more Will/Elizabeth stories!

Oh, I love it, i love it, i love it!

I finally saw AWE today and i have been scouring the PotC stories for something good and this is definitely it!

~Arawen

That is just so cute! a fairytale ending for them, i loved it...

Faith _

i thought this was good

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tis tre cute at the end

Aw, I loved it! Especially the visit from Jack, and the ending, it made me so happy :-)

Great job!