forget what I said before, this is a much better chapter, a lot of build up and satisfying payoff

extremely well freaking done, a fantastic mix

So, Kuno apparently cannot break the fourth wall.

..

I'll see myself out.

So damn funny. I laughed at some parts, so many good laughs. You made excellent usage of Ranma and it's typical humor. I imagine adding khr to a crossover like this, and the chaos would be unimaginable!
I kinda wanted to see tuxedo mask fall in love with girl ranma, like he saw her doing CPR or something to save him and in that instant love bloomed. Or even funnier, luna gives ranma senshi power. I mean he already dresses up as a girl so why not?

Loved it.

Corrections offered without malice.
"marital artists" martial
"Ryogua" Ryouga

I love how well you set up the bit players to have large impacts in true Neriman fashion.
Corrections offered without malice.
"bring my army thought" through

Mousse using his blindness as an asset was a masterstroke.

"Ryogua" again

"trying to off-balance" trying to imbalance

You keep misspelling Ryouga as Ryogua.

Corrections offered without malice.
"marital artists" Despite all of Cologne's machinations, I think you meant martial artists.
"Ry

I came across your page on the Ranma Fanon wiki so decided read it. this story drew me in after the first paragraph and i have been unable to put it down since

An oldie but a goodie. I feel a bit silly reviewing this in 2018, but here I am.

I enjoyed the comedy based on misunderstandings and absurd deceptions. The action sequences were well detailed. And Beneda's character arc did a great job of keeping me invested in the story. And I don't feel that anything I just said does this story justice, so I'll shut up now.

Perfection. Now, unto part two :D