This was lovely! I loved the Ash description in the beginning it was so accurate

Oh my lanta

Hehehe... Freaking gay pansy... You're funny, and it's so true!

Talk about a surprise! May and Drew make-out session.

Harley is really creepy, weird, not to mention a stalker, bit of a little girl, too dramatic, rather hauntingly strange, and now gay huh really too much for a guy but DREW is another story can't explain it but you can get a clue and I had no idea May would turn out like that, makes me wonder how ill turn out in the future, hopefully not like that.

Nice work.

lol You are awesome

freaking gay pansy :D

i would probably be a drew harley fan too

:)

Haha freaking gay pansy. You're hilarious. :)

OMG! So CUTE! Lusty, but not so lusty that they actually start doing it. That's the kind I like because I don't really like the idea of them doing it. :P Lol this was really funny, cute, romantic, over all, one of my favorite one-shots! :D Great job! ;)

Oh, right indeed. The ending was just right. Harley... Oh, dear.. Haha! Oooh, so love Drue and May! And wow, they're even better as grownups! I mean, look at this! Totally funny fic. DAML for life!

Hilarious... I love how you kept May and Drew in character. I know you made them mature and stuff, but unlike many other fics, you kept them aware of how they used to be and still reminiscent of their younger more-ic selves. I'm not sure if Harley's actually gay, but it left the story on an interesting amusing note. :p not much to say about your style, except that I love it. Grammar is excellent. Faved :)

Well, how about that

i pesonally didn't like how aggressive may was, i think drew should have been the aggressive one,
but other than that it was good.

I loved this a lot! X3 LOL harley xD

OMG XD that line just made the story. that was an awesome ending XD Good job!