| Reviews for HEAT |
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  risa chapter 6 . 12/20/2018 Ed is transgender |
| risa chapter 3 . 12/20/2018 *shakes head* Dark you are evil |
| risa chapter 2 . 12/19/2018 AGAIN I ASK HOW DO YOU DEEL WITH THIS CRAZINESS!)?i give up |
| risa chapter 1 . 12/19/2018 *Looks t Naruto*How do you deel with this |
 AccountKiller10000000 chapter 10 . 8/26/2012 There was no link! |
| AccountKiller10000000 chapter 6 . 8/26/2012 Now dark and light are in it :3 |
| AccountKiller10000000 chapter 2 . 8/25/2012 Den is cuuute 3 Yeah, her name is den:3 |
| AccountKiller10000000 chapter 1 . 8/25/2012 FLAMER MAIL! I love fletcher your mean... Read on banana! INNER SANITY:She thinks she be a banana *.*' |
| cfaithcsf chapter 9 . 2/21/2012 Just reviewing to say that i think the new greed should have been Psiren and the new pride Nina instead. Because the 7 homunculi are usually somewhat similar to their names personality-wise. Psiren is always stealing things therefore she is greedy. The new Nina seems a bit haughty and arrogant there fore Pride. Interesting story by the way |
| Vivi the Vixen chapter 1 . 12/10/2011 hmmm not bad |
| Obsessive-reader1228 chapter 9 . 7/14/2011 Ok, I don't want to sound mean cuz I honestly love the fic, but please get your facts right. Envy can ONLY transform into other people, not animals. You mentioned him turning into a bird, which he can't do. The other thing is that you have to many OC's the more thou have the more confusing the story becomes to the reader. I think you should only stick to one or two OCs so the story doesn't become confusing. Thank you! ( oh and this is just a bit of constructive criticism. Don't think I'm trying to be mean or anything) |
| Obsessive-reader1228 chapter 9 . 7/14/2011 Ok, I don't want to sound mean cuz I honestly love the fic, but please get your facts right. Envy can ONLY transform into other people, not animals. You mentioned him turning into a bird, which he can't do. The other thing is that you have to many OC's the more thou have the more confusing the story becomes to the reader. I think you should only stick to one or two OCs so the story doesn't become confusing. Thank you! ( oh and this is just a bit of constructive criticism. Don't think I'm trying to be mean or anything) |
| 7j2gh89 chapter 5 . 6/13/2011 HOLY SHIZ HAHAHAHA THAT WAS SUCH A BAD PERVERTED ACCIDENTAL PUN any way back to my original thought HOLY SHIZ ED IS GONNA HAVE AN ADORABLE HALF FOX GREEN HAIRED KID WITH ENVY AWW well it could look like either of them or both hehe |
| ShadowsOfPenAndPaper chapter 1 . 5/16/2011 The internet had a screw loose last time I tred to review so I has reviewed now! Very nice story. Cute fox. Poor fox. Poor Ed. Awwwww foxy Ed. :D |
| Elliot chapter 2 . 2/4/2011 *flinchs* danm, winry is bruttal as always i see, that was good. XD |
