Reviews for The Tshirt incident: Retaliation & Escalation
Guest chapter 11 . 7/17
I'm not sure if I'm supposed to, but I think Jereth has given some compelling reasons not to be her boyfriend. Jereth complaint about her not doing what he wants bothers me. If she wants him so bad can't she actually say that instead of Jereth telling her he knows what she wants in a relationship. Okay, she denied wanting Jereth, but he's also disrespected her personal space, boundaries, and oh yeah, chose to not use birth control. Even if he doesn't need it, couldn't he respect her need for safety. Also, why would she trust her body with someone who flat out agrees she shouldn't trust him. His whole treat like a princess thing is crap in my view. I"m a little creeped by the whole pinned to the door so she can't leave thing.
BowieQueen chapter 11 . 5/21
Thank you for writing this story. Man jareth is heard work. Haha. Sarah put up a cracking defence though. I liked the last few chapters and even though I see it'd not the end, it could still end there and I feel satisfied.

Thank you for this story :)
Battle chapter 11 . 5/5/2019
Okay but wheeeerrree is the next part? I loved this so so much
Margot Grazyna chapter 11 . 3/10/2019
Świetne, przeczytałam jednym tchem, po latach od publikacji nadal porywa i uwodzi twoich ów. Rozumiem že aktualizacji po tylu latach to już nie mam co oczekiwać?
Jenndifurry chapter 10 . 8/27/2018
Rosalinda the chicken toss champion...LOL
Stalianha chapter 11 . 8/3/2018
I guess, after nearly ten years, that we aren't getting any more of this ? If so, that's a shame. I'd have loved to see the resolution and the two of them finally spelling out the fact that they like each other and want to get in a very serious long-term relationship. Also, love the fact that Sarah's inner hormonal thoughts are basically the fangirls' voices. XD

It's great. You know how to draw and how to write, both in meaningful ways. You're great.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/8/2018
Tiger-ride of a kiss is such a great image raawwrr
Guest chapter 1 . 2/11/2018
I love this story and your other ones as well. I also love GND, though I am a little confused on a few points. Where did the elusive prom pictures come from? Did I miss a page? How did Jareth get them? What is this naked yoga I have read about in the comments? Will we ever discover what is in the mysterious trunk under Jareth’s bed? I am not a member of dart or I would have commented there. I have been agonizing over these for FOREVER! I don’t know how I can receive(if you respond) your answer but please respond!
Guest chapter 11 . 1/16/2018
Where is the rest!
SarahlouiseDodge chapter 1 . 5/15/2017
oh i didn't realise this wasn't complete. i do hope at some point you get a chance to come back to this and conclude it
BaconBaker chapter 11 . 4/25/2017
I don't think I've ever read a fic that I've been so frustrated with. It was well-written, hilarious at times, a good plot (although...um...more, please?), and an all-around joy to read. BUT I spent about 90% of the time shouting in my head-and once out loud-"Oh for crying out loud just DO IT ALREADY!" You have a terrific way of dragging something out without turning it dull and pointless. Brava! I see it's forever since this was updated, but if one review has any weight and you find yourself with some downtown, pleeeeeeeaaaaaaaase give us more!
nrunn30 chapter 11 . 4/18/2017
Against my better judgement I read this knowing it want finished. It's wonderful and I need closure...please.
redmoonrising75 chapter 11 . 3/27/2017
OMG! you had me ROLLING and in TEARS over this one! I can actually see these two sparring back and forth all through this piece. Well done, loved it!
Casey chapter 11 . 3/5/2017
I love this story! Are we going to see a resolution soon or should I just tell myself to quit squawking and be patient?
Guest chapter 11 . 2/21/2017
Please continue! It is woo good, please write more!
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