Awh. I really love this, it's really sweet.

Your writing skills are great for only being 14.

Very cute and very realistic. I also liked what you did at the beginning with the memories. Aw!

Cute, I liked :D

Thanks for sharing!

very good!

So...I've only *recently* begun reading CSI-related fanfiction, and I've been trying to indulge in one of my guilty ships, but it's pretty hard finding something decent on these two. I'm glad I picked yours out, because I find it to be a bit more realistic than some of the others I chanced upon.

Darn that finale, ne? :)

~Shirozora

oh, nice job! :) the ending was fabulous. and it fits so well with the song. awesome.

Hey!

I don't thinkn that Calleigh would act this way but I like your story though. It's really good written.

But I've got a question: What does happen in this episode? I'm from Germany and they yesterday showed only the second last episode of the 4th season.

PLEASE. Thanks.

Wow, Jelian, good job. It's really sweet, and we know she's gonna be the one that saves him. ;)

Keep on writing, I'm adding this to the CaRWash C2.

aw! That was so sweet1 I like it