Deep

I like it. O.o Does that make me twisted? Or maybe it's just because I like Peta...

Horrific, yet eerily entertaining. Good job.

good story, i really like Peta, he's awsome and he's one of my favorite characters in MAR.

anyway i hope you make another story like this soon.

but until then bye

a thumb the size of an elephant up for you. never remember reading any MAR fic with better RPG.

Oo... Very nicely written. Your imagery was awesome. Loved the creepy vibe I got off this too. There were a few spelling mistakes, but they're ok, as no one is perfect and I don't expect you to be.

All in all, Lovely work! _

Oh and cheers for writing a story about Peta! (He's one of my favourite characters.) *thumbs up*

Scary...Peta is always just scary, especially in your fic.