Thiis was so sadd! Good job though!

Yo, happy ending i see :)

I haven't been on fanfic for a while so I never saw the end of this. All i can say is awesome (punches air) don't ya love when a one-shot ends up getting extended like this.

You should have gotten way more reviews though (sighs) nvm ne.

byebye for now

ja ne

KAWAII!

wow! loved the story. loved the annaXyoh. good ideas. thank u!

pearla-chan

hey! the story's great! haha! i thought that you will kill Yoh.. sure thing if you killed Yoh, i'll KILL you!

oO diOna Oo

O.M.G

End of story

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ZOMG he's okay I wuv u sos much~ :} ~ !

...sorry for not commenting sooner...

OMG I'M SO HAPPY THINGS ARE BACK TO NORMALL!

...what am I saying? THAT WAS WAY TOO CHEESY WOMAN!

...BUT OMG SO CUUTTE! *Heart eyed*

Thats cool! Though I hoped thah Yoh will die... I have a little morbid mind... hehe.. :D

YAY! THAT WAS AWESOME! I'm glad everything worked out!

I this! It's so sad whats happning to Yoh, but the scenes with Anna & Yoh are so... AMAZING! You rock, and don't let anyone tell you otherwise.

NO! DON'T LET YOH-KUN DIE! *sobs* STAY STRONG YOH! *is covered in flames* Huh-? Ow, ow! SHIT! OW OW! *runs around, trying to stop the flames*

Anyway-ow-thanks for updating-ow-update SOON! OW!

...if you kill Yoh you WILL be murdered...when you least expect it... _*

UPDATE PLEASE! I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS TO YOH-KUN!

Yoh: plz, do me a favor and kill me now...

NOT ON YOUR LIFE! *glomps Yoh*

nice beginning

Yoh snapped (punches air) alright!

I'll be looking all over for a fic like this this for a while now. (Been searching under Hao and Yoh so sadly I kept missing this one) :(

Update! Update pretty please with sugar on top.

For an ending...em...if you don't have one then why not let Yoh go into complete mental collapse. A sad ending with the stresses too much (after what seems like a recovery) and Yoh going into complete relapse with no reponse to the outside world. He could end up believing his brother is still alive and with him and just go back to when they were both children. That way he still has the care free life he wanted but it also is heartbreaking sad for all his friends.

Yoh should allowed to be selfice once too (nods)

XD LtR likes sad endings as u can see XD

Though if you like happy endings...em...

Let Anna win :) instead of slipping into a coma like state just allow Anna to pull Yoh back (you need a heartbreakingly lovely scene though for this ending somewhere between Yoh and Anna.) Since she is an Itako and she can read minds, she could easily have the power to piece his mind back together. Worse comes to worse, he could revert back to a child like state dependent on Anna.

Finish it off like ten years later with Anna playing with her son and in the background there is Yoh back to his smiling self.

...O_O Sorry I think I went on too long. I've had writers block for a while now so I was surprised I came up with two endings so quickly (to my taste soz)

Anyway I love your fic so far and I can't wait to see how it turns out.

(waves) byebye :)