A super awesome and brilliantly detailed chapter, I love all the shifts and turns, from Jidanbo being vastly less helpful, to not Gin intro, ooh my that's a twist, and Tatsuki scaring away pervs from Orihime by crushing rocks, indicating just what else she can crush, was inspired.

The stuff about how the people in the area live, and interact, Tatsuki's outsider view on stuff like hell and Keigo constantly dodging the questions were great, dang did he ever have to explain himself XD The fight with Ganju and Tatsuki's motives for cheering him on and expanding the fight were hilarious.

Again, really fun narration, descriptions and dialogue that all feel brilliantly in character and offer a really unique perspective on events due to a lack of context which is very entertaining. Her guesses on Kukaku were fun, of course after seeing & meeting her & the observation she made, it looks more like she's harboring a tiny celebrity crush XD Also yeah she probably would have been super useful.

Loved the descriptions of everyone's souls, and the increased speed, pacing and tension as they came crashing down, kudos, that was brilliantly written, thanks so much for this story, its been a joy to read so many times, sorry I didn't review sooner!

That was awesome, her interfering with Yoruichi, Mzuiro's chill and voice, every single one of Tatsuki's reactions to Jidanbo and the other wackiness going on around her like the extra clothes and wall kicking, just, all of it was so amazing and the fight was just plain excellent, kudos!

That opening was fantastic!

Also the rest was too, great job weaving in all the characters, introducing minor changes that made the whole scene feel more alive, aided further by our fun narrator and the hints of dear Keigo in hiding were neat, kudos!

I love the depth and weight given to Tatsuki and Orihime's relationship, it was strong in the show, but seeing it more here is great, she's so dang invested!

Her image of herself as a warrior and a guardian helps too, especially with her negative reaction to the lies and yeah Ichigo's decisions made sense, up until they got their powers, but then he had other stuff going on XD

I loved Tatsuki's reflections on her desires for a grand challenge and her views wondering how, super deep and rich stuff, I love it!

A very solid and realistic chapter, it was a well thought out decision to look into the physical, not spiritual side of Tatsuki's life and show her decisions having some real impact and reactions. A shame she isn't a Shinigmai, she could have a mod soul take her place XD

Mizuiro's powers are genuinely terrifying, good ideas and creative expansion, kudos, also awesome final fight scene, super packed, tight, energetic and fast paced with a strong sense of detail and flow.

Haha, that final line was hilarious XD Also very good interactions, the tone and narration and language feel ideal for the characters. Granted Ichigo could use some lessons in subtly too XD

Amazing chat with the resident mind reader, wow he can probably ruin Aizen's plan by a massive margin, also Urahara and Yoruichi and Tessai's XD

Yoruichi was very cool and fun this chapter, though given her general disposition I can see why Tatsuki might have been intimidated or thought she wouldn't help even without her pride.

Anyway very cool and fun stuff, great tone in the conversations!

A super well described fight scene, Tatsuki's frustration and savagery and Sado's initial restrain all worked super well, plus that "Alternate way into Soul Society" thing was hilarious XD

A really awesome chapter, the progress in power, Tatsuki's reaction to being surprised XD the gambling stuff, haha, surprised he isn't OK with that. Plus the fight scene and the sense of physical sensation and power were all described incredibly well, from how pushing one's power down feels, to the fall out of Sado's blast, also yes he does rule, you do his character real justice here, as you do with everyone!

A really useful and enjoyable bridging chapter that introduces more of the casts growth, relationships, understanding and helps set things up for the next developments and conveying the passage of time very effectively, kudos! (Also hilarious opening XD)

Another really great, smooth flowing chapter where each scene moves to the next really cleanly and each one conveys a ton of character, tone and information. Also Yoruichi is brutal, the powers and sharing time were great and that ending was hilarious XD

Wow, Yoruichi is mean! Anyway this was great, Tatsuki's escalating dread, the sense of horror and fear as she went over what Soul Society did, her skill with the paper work and her method of accessing it, seriously brilliant work there, great background, character and world building. Detective Tatsuki is on the case and she even found her answers, staggering as they were, her anger at the memory erasure makes sense, I hope that comes up again cos its pretty messed up. Also that list was hilarious and her resolve and motives to save Rukia were great :D

A really fun chapter, everything flows so well, Tatsuki's narration is just so brilliant, blistering and bursting with personality and distinct language and tone, from her comments on Mahana, to Orihime, orders, and everything's, is just so great and flowing to read! Also Rukia has Tatsuki pegged XD

Another excellent chapter, Tatsuki's waking up, her confusion and analyse of Mizuiro was great, the sheer pressure and overwhelmed state he was in was excellent! Also her goading Keigo and his loyalty to his friends pushing him onward was great and in character, Orihime's fears, Urahara's dramatic, Sado's powerful background presence, all super well done!

This was a brilliant opening chapter, normally I struggle with first person but you got me wrapped up and totally engrossed, Tatsuki's tone, her language, narration and her view of herself were all brilliantly interwoven into the story, along with great descriptions that make it feel fresh!

Though really, Tatsuki, not even harboring a little crush on Orihime? XD

The battles felt tense and brutal, and the building dread and handling of other cast members was really well done and despite being familiar ground it all felt so fresh!