Reviews for Once and Future Witches
Jacob chapter 29 . 5/30/2017
Awesome
kalmaegi chapter 30 . 10/28/2015
I love how faithful to the tone of the series this one was, as well as a glimpse to old school Charmed. Episodic with enough humor and plot to get it all wrapped up nicely. For a time travel one, it's rare. Especially since Chris just have this special brand of heavy angst going for him that writers can't resist. I like the introduction of this happier, less edgy and broken Chris. At least his other self hadn't just saved his brother but his secured his own happiness too! And Prue. Ohh Prue. They've settled their issues and grown up. I'm glad.
brendafay chapter 30 . 4/28/2015
love it
darkworkangel chapter 1 . 1/4/2015
i carn't get on your website for this story i used to be able to but not any more any reason why
great story through but i prefere the one on the website
julia23602829 chapter 7 . 12/6/2014
young phoebe is so cute hahaha. I'm loving this
gabyhyatt chapter 30 . 11/7/2014
I love your fic, very original
Marcus S. Lazarus chapter 30 . 3/16/2014
Interesting bit of work, I’ll give you that for nothing.
I always enjoy time travel as a concept when it’s handled well, and you certainly did a superb job here, beginning with an intriguing opening and progressing from there to explore a fascinating threat that neatly uses the complex ‘rules’ of time travel in the ‘Charmed’ universe (Actions in the past can have an immediate effect on the future if they’re not ‘corrected’, that kind of thing), leading up to an excellent moment as the sisters of 2007 meet their counterparts of 1999.
All interactions between the temporally-displaced Charmed Ones and their past selves are superbly handled, varying from PastPhoebe initially hitting on Chris before learning his identity to their trips back even further into the past to track a foe that ties into both Leo’s past and their own actions in the future (To say nothing of the complexities caused by their cross-temporal relationships as Leo finds himself reacting to Piper’s hints of their future relationship without knowing any specific himself).
A few of the later trips felt like you might have been pushing your plot further than you needed to- the meeting with their teenage selves was good, but at the same time it felt like you were trying to incorporate a glimpse at the Halliwells’ at virtually all the stages of their past (Childhood, teens, early witchcraft and later witchcraft), which could have put the timeline under further strain as they keep running into each other- but the concluding appearance of the Triad’s Good counterpart was still fascinating, and I certainly can’t fault your final appearance as their last and dearest wish is granted at long last.
All in all, a temporally complicated but fascinating storyline as the Halliwells face a threat that requires a cross-temporal alliance to vanquish (My only regret is the absence of Cole, and that’s just because he was my favourite character); keep up the great work!
AliceGirl6 chapter 30 . 2/2/2014
Great story! really like it.
ixen-ugh chapter 5 . 2/1/2014
I totally just realized that Chris went to the past from his future and then when he went to the past or charmed ones present he went to their past so he just went to the double past O_o -Ixen
ObsessedwReading chapter 17 . 5/12/2013
I love this fanfic. I hopw they manage to stop Kaalaya for good.
ObsessedwReading chapter 16 . 5/12/2013
Amazing chapter.
ObsessedwReading chapter 15 . 5/12/2013
Great. Love this. I hope that everything ends well.
ObsessedwReading chapter 14 . 5/12/2013
I love this. Great job on this.
ObsessedwReading chapter 13 . 5/12/2013
Awesome! :) I love this.
ObsessedwReading chapter 12 . 5/12/2013
I love this.
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