Awwww, I love this chapter. For both Zidane's relationship with Baku and Freya. I think my favorite thing about this story (and almost all of your FFIX work) is how believable it is and how it matches the story perfectly, while still being unpredictable and fun to read.

Ahaha, this is probably my favorite chapter in this story. Leave it to Zidane! I always wondered how he became such a womanizer, I loved how you portrayed his "transformation." ;)

Oh, and did you delete Paper Roses? I really enjoyed that one, even though it was cut short.

Blank is my favoritest character, even if we don't get to use him much in battles. I love what you've done with him in your fics. Blank and Zidane interaction as you write it never fails to put a goofy smile on my face. I hope you find muse to do more focusing on these two. 3

:D You hung Zidane :D

*lights torch and grabs pitchfork*

Your story is so good and well written, I cant beliefe its already over *cry*

LOVED IT .

omg, thats so like Zidane .

Everytime you inserted a "(literally)" I laught so hard! This was hilarious

That was an... 'interesting' idea. Very well written

So cute I loved this chapter

'I've never seen anyone without a tail,' - great comeback this is so cute *cuddleslittleZidane*

Poor thing

This chapter was very good and I cant wait to read the next

wow thanks

ABOUT RUBY

Sorry to point this out. But Ruby isn't actually a member of Tantalus, she was a girl they hired on to play Cornilia in "I want to be your Canary" She doesn't have much to do with them, she may have known them off an on for a year or two by the sounds of her letters.

Also she's not an orphan. In the game when you're looking for the Superslick to Fix the mechine at Mognet Central at the end of the Moogle Quest, Zidane asks her if she has any and she says yes and that he can have it, she'll get her parents (Folks) to send more.

ABOUT AGES

Cinna is pretty old, he's a man in the game, has a beard, he's probably the oldest next to Baku.

Marcus is secound oldest after that tho for some stupid reason I've heard they call Blank, Aniki (Elder brother) -maybe its because he's the most mature-

Blank is around Zidane's age maybe a year or two older, Ruby is about that age too...

Zidane is only 4 however. In the Game he is 16. Garland says he made Zidane 12 years earlier, the body was that of a young boy. so logicall he'd be 4.

I could probably bore you to death with theom but I'll be nice and shut up now. I love this story so far, its nearly as cute as Brick by Brick, which you should have made longer. (Don't people realize the 50 chapters is the trend! XD)

Oh, this was adorable! Loved every second of it! :] I'll get around to reading your Garnet fic here in the next few days. Ciao!

Sincerely,

DragonGirl323

I just have to say really quick that little Zidane is FRIGGIN CUTE! :]

That's all!

Sincerely,

DragonGirl323

ALL right try this Idea for a fanfic zidane goes back in time meets his eight year old self and messes with the gang by exsploiting every secret he he.