Too bad Bill broke in just when things were getting good! The only thing better than a kiss from Chloe would be a peach flavored kiss from Chloe.

Haha Oh that made me laugh so much!

Love the way you put in the 'Do you trust me, Chloe?' part.

Really well written. I bet Mr. Buchanan was the most embaressed of the lot!

That was incredibly awesome

hahaha loved it. ooh bill, way to ruin the moment. oh well. *shakes head*

All together now: AW!

Way to put a great spin on the sweetest part of that movie. I remember seeing an interview with Tobey Macguire once, though, and he said that he nearly drowned doing that scene because the water was going up his nose, and he obviously couldn't breathe through his mouth, so that kind of sucked the romance out of it for me for a while. LOL! But thank you for putting it right back in.

Poor Chloe there at the beginning. I could practically see her squirming uncomfortably in her chair, anticipating watching THAT scene with Jack.

Way to go, Bill. Breaking up that hot sexy little scene when it looked like the two were THISCLOSE to going at it in the brekak room. But that last line made me laugh.

Great work, as per usual. Heh, are you getting tired of all this spam in your inbox yet? ;)

LOL that was great! I love Jack and Chloe:)

Haha that was brilliant "that wasn't in the script was it?" classic!

:-) Cute.

Wow. Very hot. I commented on LJ as well as here, hope that was ok.