I don't think I've ever read a fan fic that takes place so many years after the manga series. It's nice to imagine that they stayed together that long. :-)

wow, really well written! i love it .

Wow, that's so cute. I loved it.

Thanks for writing

wow, that was sweet! they are so close and intimate. it's cute and light, i like it.

and well written!

Thanks for another delightful piece of GC fanfiction, I loved reading about the easy, comfortable intimacy Florian and Ray have in this story

omg soo cool ..cant wait to read some off ur other works.

This is so different from Fractures, which I also loved. That’s one thing, of many, I like about your writing. The stories are not all copycats of one another. I like seeing Noir and Florian interact in the future. You kept their personalities but they acted in a more mature manner. You did a very good job